5034246 i agree...but its getting a bit too much. she's not adding anything to the actual story, just popping up for no reason, saying a sentence, and disappearing the same way. (also she's not in the tags and the story might lack a 'random' tag)
5034314 It also says in the rules you can only have five Character tags, but that doesnt mean other character are not part of the story. i taged the more important pieces that i am working with, but there are other ponies that are involved with the story line.
Grammar could use some work, some words are misspelled and some dialogue feels really stilted.
But I'm having troubles not reading this ridiculous story, just because of how dumb-in-a-kinda-good-way it is.
A fic with vinyl licking everything with a sex tag in it...I can see where this is going...(haven't read it)
5031387 it gets awesome. no spoiler. just read
5031407
Will read it later DJ snowdrop, but yea, I already know where this is going.
(I'm busy)
5031413 Okay Dokey Lokey
...maybe cut it down a bit with the pink one.
5034023
But it's fuuuuuny....
5034246 i agree...but its getting a bit too much.
she's not adding anything to the actual story, just popping up for no reason, saying a sentence, and disappearing the same way.
(also she's not in the tags and the story might lack a 'random' tag)
5034314
But what fun is there in making sense?
Also, her popping up like that is good.
My face is a curse... YES.
5034314 It also says in the rules you can only have five Character tags, but that doesnt mean other character are not part of the story.
i taged the more important pieces that i am working with, but there are other ponies that are involved with the story line.
5035599 Hahahahahahaha. Wait my little toad in a box. just wait till next chapter.
5035818
This was written in honor of me. The power of Class compels you.
5035876 Well technically you are green, and the toad in the story is yellow and white, but you can think that.
5035893
... This is just my camo
5035907 so you are blending in with the chair?
5035913
You need not bother yourself with the affairs of a toad...
5035923 Okay Dokey Lokey