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be aware, that i am aware of some indenting and spacing. i will go over that at a later date. hope you like it.
I'm going to favourite this, because I really want to see where you'll go with this incredibly silly concept.
There are some minor grammatical mistakes, but nothing too annoying.
5021860 Thanks. I have a very, weird idea of where I am going with this. this is also a new format for me, i usually write a lot of poems. so i had to update my writing style.
I can get past the slight grammar errors what with the concept being quite humorous. And with that mature tag, I imagine things will get rather..."interesting" in a hurry. XD
truth be told i fking hate indentation unless its in printed form where it belongs.
it was invented to save printing space that would otherwise a full on empty line.
5022303 very interesting indeed.
i am sorry if the font and everything changes on you guys, i don't really like how big the letters are but i can't figure out how to size them down. if you have problems let me know please. again sorry.
... I am unsure of how to feel...
Mature sex. Vinyl is licking random stuff . Vinyl tackles Dashie to the ground. Why do i get the feeling that this is its going to out a lot of minds into the gutter.
5024378 why's that?
5024476
.. Well, I was in a box.
But I got to lick Vinyl.
See now?
5024643 omg that is the funniest crap i have heard all night. cause your name, HAHA. that was a good one.
I'd be happy. you got your job done so far, plus you can take it as you kissed Vinyl, for free. Which who wouldn't want to do that.
5024836
I'm glad you think it's amusing
5025290 I have a bad sense of humor.
Grammar could use some work, some words are misspelled and some dialogue feels really stilted.
But I'm having troubles not reading this ridiculous story, just because of how dumb-in-a-kinda-good-way it is.
A fic with vinyl licking everything with a sex tag in it...I can see where this is going...(haven't read it)
5031387 it gets awesome. no spoiler. just read
5031407
Will read it later DJ snowdrop, but yea, I already know where this is going.
(I'm busy)
5031413 Okay Dokey Lokey
...maybe cut it down a bit with the pink one.
5034023
But it's fuuuuuny....
5034246 i agree...but its getting a bit too much.
she's not adding anything to the actual story, just popping up for no reason, saying a sentence, and disappearing the same way.
(also she's not in the tags and the story might lack a 'random' tag)
5034314
But what fun is there in making sense?
Also, her popping up like that is good.
My face is a curse... YES.
5034314 It also says in the rules you can only have five Character tags, but that doesnt mean other character are not part of the story.
i taged the more important pieces that i am working with, but there are other ponies that are involved with the story line.
5035599 Hahahahahahaha. Wait my little toad in a box. just wait till next chapter.
5035818
This was written in honor of me. The power of Class compels you.
5035876 Well technically you are green, and the toad in the story is yellow and white, but you can think that.
5035893
... This is just my camo
5035907 so you are blending in with the chair?
5035913
You need not bother yourself with the affairs of a toad...
5035923 Okay Dokey Lokey
damn, twilight! never knew she was into that stuff. then again, it's always the quiet ones....
5047264 haha.
oh sweet Faust, i think Octavia sent it. and i just realized that she didn't get licked. not even once!
5116457 You are thinking really hard on this!
You are struggling, to understand and I laugh that you are doing this. it entertains me to watch this. Haha keep thinking i enjoy your assumptions but you are wrong
Two chapters left. Thats all i am going to release.
By the way: best comment.
5117192 YOUR WRONG! DON'T MAKE ME LICK YOU!
5117203 Why would you lick me? hmm did someone give you the toad? how did they get into the cave?
5117222 why would i need a toad to decide to lick someone? just ask my mom. i licked her nose just last week while we were in the store.
5117226 oh well that is true. still, are you going to jump into the cumputer?
5117234 i'll wait until your asleep. tomorrow, you shall wake up with a cowlick.
5117256 You are going to attempt to give all 9 inches of my hair to stand up. Gel won't even do that. The good and expensive kind too.
5117273 my brother had over a foot long hair from the shoulder down, and i managed to get his hair to stand up straight. it took over an hour and three cans of hair spray and gel. then he cut it off and donated it to cancer. is that what your doing?
5117290 I thought about doing that when it gets longer but no. i have always had long hair. ever since i can remember. it's down to my shoulders and i kind of have the Dumb Beiber bowl thing but i always brush it off to the side more over my eye. emo style. a lot of my friends do the donations and i will when i deem it long enough. i don't know why my hair was long when i was younger, but it is long now because i am into the scene look.
5117256 hmm weird. I woke up with a cowlick.
5121655
oh fuck i totally needed that! i completely forgot that i threatened you with a licking! i was on the floor! i couldn't breath!
5121676 you were laughing that hard. i smile to that.i remembered at the last minute right before i was going to log out but decided to stay in
i am happy now. although i don't know how my new clopfic will turn out. lots of ponies like this one.
just gonna settle this and ask. who sent the god damn toad?
5208749 Don't worry update comes next week. and you will find out! I am not giving in!
5237900 fair enough. I shall wait