Invasion of the Machines (Comment Driven Story)

by The One and only One

The Adventure Begins

I stare into the orange eyes of my...friend and then back towards the direction Applejack just ran from.

...<I just saw Applejack>...

...<Applejack is part of MLP FIM>...

...<This means I am in the MLP Universe>...

...<Which means this is the Apple Family Orchard>...

I turn back again to see that Mechagodzilla is wandering around aimlessly in the orchard. Then the cold reality of the situation hits me. I decided it was a good time to freak out, and allowed my body to fall to the ground, shuddered, convulsing, and rattling in fear.

ChurrwrwrwrwrwChuwrwrwrwrwChshuuuuuChurrwrwrwrw

<Holy shit, holy shit, holy shit, holy SHIT!! How did this happen?! I need to find out. Now. Shivering on the ground in a body that isn't even yours isn't how you fix a problem.>

I continued to spaz out on the ground, reliving my nightmare in the void, but outside the void, trying to figure out how my life came to being stuck inside a machine of mass destruction with another machine of equal destruction wandering behind me. I continue to do this for who knows how long before something kicked me in the back of my head.

Chrrrrrrrrrrr!

I look up to see my companion staring down at me, as if he was looking deep into my soul, if I still have one. In some strange way I could understand why he kicked me. As if he knows that scrambling in the dirt isn't going to fix my problems. I slowly get up with the help of MG1 due to my limited articulation.

Chrwrwrwrrrrrr!

Chrrrrrrrr!

Once I was up I was able to focus better on the situation. First thing is that we had to get out of the orchard since Applejack probably ran off to get the rest of the main six. The second thing would be to figure out how we got here in the first place. And third was to try and enjoy what we have without causing any trouble.
ChrwrewrwrwrwuuurrrChuChuChrrrrrrChwrwr

I do my best to tell MG1 what the plan was with random sounds and hand gestures. He seemed to understand as he begins to follow me in the opposite direction that Applejack ran and hope that mt episode didn't wasn't too much time.

Unbeknownst to either of us was that a set of red and yellow eyes were watching us from a distance.

"This will definitely be interesting...and chaotic..."

What will happen next!

Author's Note:

Ok second chapter is in, also since this is my first comment driven story, expect the chapters to be from 400 to 1000 words long in the beginning.

Comments

[Rainbow Dream]

I think my comment from the last chapter was read. :]

[The One and only One]

4777228 Yes...yes it was!