Waiting for the clop lol .....man cadence is a beast :)

Wow.

Such mood swing.

Very Cadence.

Many cramp.
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Heheh, I'm having a lot of fun with the dialog in this thing.

Hormones. The bane of husbands everywhere.

Jeez, I'd hate to be Shining, dealing with angry yelling and whining on a daily basis.

Pregnancy didn't just make Cadence hormonal, it made her freaking bipolar

Poor Shining and Twilght, they've been through a helluva ride and it's far from over.

Should have thought one through

Not sure what to think of this. On the one hand it's an interesting premise and Shining's in-character for the most part. Cadance is where things get a bit iffy for me. While I can see why she'd be frustrated and all, and she really doesn't mean to be so horrible, the story is making her into a complete bitch. Totally whiny and nasty to the guy whose been nothing but supportive and loving to her? She's pregnant, so it's OK!

I don't think this is intentional, nor am I completely criticizing it, I'm just throwing my two cents on what's going on. I really do want to like this, but so far I have mixed feelings. I'll keep reading, though, to see if things improve.

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You might like the next chapter more then

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That's no question. It is simple. READ

Christ, men have to deal with this for almost a year? Jesus Christ, that's like a living hell.

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Pregnancy does that to most mares. I didn't expect Cadene to be affected, of all things.

So much drama, I love it!

“That’s sweet of you…but could you have at least left a little for ice cream? I mean, really! You spend all of your bits on your friends, your buddies, your “bros,” but you don’t spend any on your own wife?”

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“I’m fine…but Cadance isn’t. I know you’re probably pretty mad at her, and she’s mad at you, but that doesn’t mean you can just let her walk away like that. I think you should go talk with her,” Twilight said softly.

She cried out, wrapping a hoof around his neck and pulling him in.

“Isn’t this just great? It’s just like when we were young. Same park, same snobes,” Cadance paused to take in a deep breath of air,

My reaction. 😝

“Oh, good,” she said sweetly, a smile returning to her face. “I don’t think I would’ve been able to chase after her anyways.”

the back wheels of the cart lifting ever so slightly off

Shouldn’t it be front wheels?

as he grew nearer towards the picnic, not wanting to break the news to his wife.

even though she was a few feet away.

“I know!” she burst out, struggling to push herself up onto her hooves. “I just wish somepony would help me!”

Yes someone help her up already!!