Hope for the future
Day six/Frost's and Twilight's dream/ 2:36 P.M. Twilight's world
Frost sat by the creek, skipping stones across the river. Yesterday, the princess was unavailable, but today, Twilight would prepare a spell of some sort to bring the two alicorn princesses, and five of her friends into their dream...day five, he learned about all these natural things, rivers, trees,mountains, all these wonderful things...that, Frost guessed, crushed by the Krovozhadnye.
*ZZZZIIPPP*
"Everypony alright?" Twilight asked.
"Yea" A cyan Pegasus with a rainbow mane said
"Yes...is..anypony hurt?" A yellow Pegasus with a long pink asked shyly.
"I'm good sugercube, what 'bout ya'll?" An orange Earth pony with a light brown stetson hat on her head asked.
"My word, is everypony alright? That was quite surprising." A white unicorn with a stylish purple mane replied.
"WEEEEE! That was fun! I wanna go again! Can we Twilight?! CAN WE?!" begged a pink earth pony.
"We will eventually Pinkie *woopie!* Princess Luna? Princess Celestia? Are you two alright?" Twilight called out.
"Indeed my fateful student." Celestia replied, coming out of the woods with Luna.
"Okay, we must be a little off, because if he heard us, then he would have rushed here to help."
"Want be to look for him?" the cyan Pegasus asked.
"No Rainbow, we stick together."
"Boring around here...." Frost dozed on, looking around, no Twilight and friends anywhere. A small rabbit then jumped on Frost, who flew back with a "FRAGGLERAGGLEOHMAHCELESTIASUNNUVA WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?"
"I think I heard him scream actually...we must be getting close" Twilight told the group.
"Scream? what a sissy..." Rainbow said.
"BOO!!!"
Rainbow---> High pitched scream
"Teehee, your so fun to scare Dashie.." Pinkie said as she bounced away.
"What was that? Eh, whatever. So, what's your name little one?" Frost asked the small bunny he was petting.
"Eh, I'm not good with names, I mean, mine's is Frost...so I'll call you...Fluff?"
The bunny curled up in front of Frost. "Guess that's a yes Fluff?"
Twilight and her group then got out of the woods and into a large clearing, a single tree close to a lake on the other side of the clearing. Twilight put her hoof in front of her muzzle and silently did a "ssshhhh."
As they got closer they could hear a stallion's voice from behind the tree.
"Oh Sweet Celestia*Celestia flinched*you are sooo cute Fluff, I never seen anything like you ever before, I mean, all we ever had were huge*Fluttershy flinched* murderous *Princess Luna and Twilight Flinched* unstoppable *Applejack and Rainbow Dash flinched* beasts that wanna kill you for no reason what so ever, but here we got you small little cuties~"
"Wait" Frost said, stopping everypony in their tracks. "What's this feeling of energy, and just to ark my muzzle upwards.."
"It's happiness silly!"
Everypony froze. They didn't see Pinkie leave.
"And my muzzle?"
""It's a smile!"
"Smile eh? Sounds awesome."
"It is!"
Just then, Twilight and her group ran Frost.
Then her whole group froze as they seen Frost, except for Twilight and Pinkie.
*In Unison* "He's hotter then I thought!!"
*In sexy voice, like how fan girls picture their idol* "Hey there everypony, My name's Frost."
*CUE STUTTERED AND STRUGGLED HI'S FROM THE MARES*
"So, Princess Celestia." Frost began.
"Please Frost....just call me...Celestia...Celly works too..." said the Princess, licking her lips.
"I'm...Honored? Well Celest-"
"Celly...I just love how hot it--" Celestia whispered
"NO! OKAY LOOK! LISTEN! WAIT TILL I'M DONE FIRST PLEASE!!"
Everypony was now quiet.
"Okay, look, for one reason or another, I come from a ruined future of Equestria, and had somehow managed to link up with Twilight here. So I need to warn you about an incoming threat. The Krovozhadnye. A bunch of bloodthirsty mofos who will kill and enslave everypony."
The group sat in silence.
"I have my reasons to believe that the Krovozhadnye are incoming to you all, you must stop them, and save our future."
"But HOW exactly are we gonna stop them, I mean, Didn't you tell Twilight there were basically invincible?" asked Rainbow Dash.
"Exactly what I wanna tell you! They are half organic, and half mechanical so the best way to deal with them would be--"
Frost vanished.
"What?!"
"Where did he?!"
"Frost!?"
"FROST!!!!"
First person mode for Frost now.
M-My eyes....I.Hard...
I crack my eyes open a bit to peak, and see myself being dragged along a path. The meeting...I warned them, but I couldn't tell them how to kill a Krovozhadnye soldier....*scream* What...? *scream* that pain...no...*Agony* that can only come from one place....*Guard picks me up*
"WH-WHAT ARE YOU?!"
*Guard throws me into the floor*
Where....*screams of suffering* that could only come from...
*Torturer picks me up*
"Welcome to the execution circle SCUM" the Krovozhadnye yells in my face, throwing me down.
*The executioner comes into my view*
"Tsk,Tsk,Tsk, even though you are useful 207, nothing *lifts up an axe*, I repeat, NOTHING IS LATE FOR MY GAME!!!"
*The executioner then lifts the axe high into the air, above my neck* "GOODBYE SCUM." and brought the axe crashing down.
415194 Hotdiggitydawg bro, that's some good advice, I'll take it to mind, Thanks a lot!
Again, I'm kinda new, so advice it greatly appreciated!
415194 Although, I'll utilize in in the following chapters, If I have time then I'll fix the others. 415088 I have another story called "Sweet Celestia what have I done?" that will cause men to lose their testicles and women to barf it out onto the man's face...BUT good question, I never really thought about it, just about 4 hours earlier I was like, I should write a serious novel...and I did, making it up as I go. -I also cut out a chapter...but I don't think I should put it back up... 415061 Fun fact: Krovozhadnye is Russian for 'Bloodthirsty' I always thought it sounded cool oh, and I'll use that if ya don't mind. 415138 Yea, Now..TASTE THE CHAPTER 4 CLIFFHANGER
Ah, yes.
You will soon find out that Frost will have one of the weirdest secrets.
And I'm not shipping him with Twilight!
As far as I know anyway.
Do you have an editor?
415499 Ummm...I just started writing....*counts fingers* about 6 hours ago, so...no not really, but I plan for this to be a long book, and finish it by the end of next week. And, just putting this out there for everyone to see, chapter five is gonna go kick flank.
415518 Long do you plan on it being?
415531 The Average-ish number of pages in fanfics.
Take a guess
415537 I'm not really sure there is an average.
Anyways, are you sure you want to finish it within the week? That seems a bit rushed. If you take more time with your writing, you would be able to create a better end product.
415546 Yea, guess your right, anyway I have an excuse for spelling errors, I blame the dubtrot I listen to while typing. ( Pony Dubstep )
Anyways, I'll give this fic a fair chance and see how it goes.
415558 That actually means a lot to me, thanks!
im getting a tizzle twist of terminator.
415631 Not sure where you got that from...but ya know, you gave me an idea...