I forgot to mention it before, and it's just a quirk with me, but using the feminine spelling for our soon to be groom irks me a bit. Nothing unbearable, mind, just that little niggling annoyance in the back of your brain.
Did I? If I did that, blame my word processor. I can right-click for synonyms and I made sure to use "groom-to-be" so they may have reversed it. Let me check it on my next editing day.
Why make a soundproof greenhouse? Because they're in the middle of the pony expy of downtown New York. It's basically a pleasure garden. And silence is important.
No, I meant you spell his name Jo, which is the feminine spelling; the masculine form is Joe. It bugs me as I have a somewhat vested interest in the name. (It's mine.)
Sounds about right. And yet it just feels so right. I can't explain it. This burly donkey dude just feels like a Jo. I may also have been recalling Burns. "John Anderson, my Jo, John." You know me and classical literature.
The subplots are interesting, but I really want, Hum Dum, to turn Mane-iac around. Something about that pairing that I just want to love.
P.S. Twilight, give Spike his book back! Dudes not hurting anyone and it's not like he has a nice of mare for himself, plus I'm sure she has her own guilty pleasures.
4468585 Yeah, I thought that's what you were going for.
Aaah! After reading, "Found You", then this, I really want Hum Dum and Mane-iac to work out. Hell, maybe get some of the life she lost back before she be came the Mane-iac.
I'll just have to keep hope alive. Great Job and Good luck with the rest of the story!
4472247 Yeah, I prefer that shipping too. No, it was how the author made the Mane-iac's personality and give her a back story that I wanted you to see. Something about that made me really think about, Hum Dum's chances of turning her away from super villainess .
Just me thinking about their relationship together. Thought I'd just share that with you.
I'm working on that too. I watched the episode again and noted just how insane Mane-iac was. She's been in therapy and taken some drugs. She is recovering. But that means she has to realize how insane everything she did was.
I forgot to mention it before, and it's just a quirk with me, but using the feminine spelling for our soon to be groom irks me a bit. Nothing unbearable, mind, just that little niggling annoyance in the back of your brain.
uncer her. under her.
He kept. She kept.
loaded own. loaded down.
perspiration damping. perspiration dampening.
So why would you make a soundproof greenhouse?
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Did I? If I did that, blame my word processor. I can right-click for synonyms and I made sure to use "groom-to-be" so they may have reversed it. Let me check it on my next editing day.
Why make a soundproof greenhouse? Because they're in the middle of the pony expy of downtown New York. It's basically a pleasure garden. And silence is important.
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No, I meant you spell his name Jo, which is the feminine spelling; the masculine form is Joe. It bugs me as I have a somewhat vested interest in the name. (It's mine.)
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It's an entirely acceptable variation. For example Jo Koy. It just felt more "country" and seemed like a good name. It really grew on me.
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Actually, it's very Southern... for a girl. For a boy, you'd get Boy Named Sue treatment.
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Sounds about right. And yet it just feels so right. I can't explain it. This burly donkey dude just feels like a Jo. I may also have been recalling Burns. "John Anderson, my Jo, John." You know me and classical literature.
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It's not a big deal, just a little quirk when I read it.
The subplots are interesting, but I really want, Hum Dum, to turn Mane-iac around. Something about that pairing that I just want to love.
P.S. Twilight, give Spike his book back! Dudes not hurting anyone and it's not like he has a nice of mare for himself, plus I'm sure she has her own guilty pleasures.
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The sub-plots take up some good portion of the story. Hum Drum and Mane-iac get attention but not until near the end.
4468585 Yeah, I thought that's what you were going for.
Aaah! After reading, "Found You", then this, I really want Hum Dum and Mane-iac to work out. Hell, maybe get some of the life she lost back before she be came the Mane-iac.
I'll just have to keep hope alive. Great Job and Good luck with the rest of the story!
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"Found You"? Never heard of that one. Who wrote it and do you have a link?
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Found You!
by Sketchy Changeling
I don't read much Human X Anthro, but this saw really good. Any Mane-iac fan will mostly like it. Give it a read when you get the time.
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I need a link. The mobile site is bad with trying to search for stories.
It's a human story? Human Hum Drum and Mane-iac?
4472152 Sorry, don't know how to link the story using my tablet.
It's a human story, OC human and Anthro Mane-iac. Romance and Teen rated. No sex. Should still be Featured!
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Ah. Not much for OC humans. And I'm really a Hum Drum/Mane-iac shipper.
4472247 Yeah, I prefer that shipping too. No, it was how the author made the Mane-iac's personality and give her a back story that I wanted you to see. Something about that made me really think about, Hum Dum's chances of turning her away from super villainess .
Just me thinking about their relationship together. Thought I'd just share that with you.
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I'm working on that too. I watched the episode again and noted just how insane Mane-iac was. She's been in therapy and taken some drugs. She is recovering. But that means she has to realize how insane everything she did was.