I (have to) agree with you one that one; after all, there seemed to be some spelling errors at the end such as this one:
Cadence and Shining had finally snapped out of their depression, both realizing that they couldn't change the past but what they could do...Was try to make amends for their betrayels. Shining had been released from his bonds as has Cadence the two assisted Inferna by mapping out all known places the caribou might be hiding. Inferna then redirected her search teams. If Shadow Scar had been hurt in any way the ones responcable would have hell to pay.
It has promise, but it needs work.
I'd suggest for you to seek out help from the Overly Extensive Editors group.
I'll follow this, for now.
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I (have to) agree with you one that one; after all, there seemed to be some spelling errors at the end such as this one: