Alright, so you devote 6 chapters to build-up of character and then suddenly hit us with the romance and clop in the 7th chapter? Hell, to be honest, I would have preferred a romantic chapter and THEN a clop chapter because it just seems kind of sudden to lay it down on the reader so suddenly.
However, that was a hell of a clop scene and my love for Luna only amplifies my enjoyment of it. Good job man. <-- They need a Luna emoticon.
Who needs plans?! Screw plans!
What kind of turn did THIS take? *shudders*
That was... very well written. Wow. Good job, sir.
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That was an...er.... "interesting" turn of events....
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Not exactly my cup of tea either, but it was still Luna...
We need to make "Screw the plan! Who needs the plan?!" a meme!
Alright, so you devote 6 chapters to build-up of character and then suddenly hit us with the romance and clop in the 7th chapter? Hell, to be honest, I would have preferred a romantic chapter and THEN a clop chapter because it just seems kind of sudden to lay it down on the reader so suddenly.
However, that was a hell of a clop scene and my love for Luna only amplifies my enjoyment of it. Good job man. <-- They need a Luna emoticon.
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Oh my... This was very, VERY well written. Good job on this chapter.
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^ This
Screw the plan! Who needs the plan not me
Now that was a good payoff. That was hot, indeed TAW. Thank you for writing it