Wyatt was once human but thanks to the Russians he is no more and after being blown off a bridge in the Moscow metro tunnels he is now in a new world of peace and harmony, can he adapt.
From what I've seen, you have a number of run-on sentences that do greatly to detract from the story. We understand fluidity, but the run-on is just too much of it. So much that it cause us to just glide though the story.
story is good but plzzz plzzz proof read it before you post it
Thanks for the tip I have re-read and made the changes I needed to.
I love metro, there aren't enough crossovers with it.
My favourite game and book, mixed with mlp.
I'm tearing up
From what I've seen, you have a number of run-on sentences that do greatly to detract from the story. We understand fluidity, but the run-on is just too much of it. So much that it cause us to just glide though the story.