WWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTT?????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!!!!?!!!!?!?!?!?!?!? LUNA IS CELESTIA'S DAUGHTER, AND LUNA IS HALF HUMAN WHAT!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?
4050670 MA5 fire erupted and killed the human mean you had to kill 38 billion in possibly not with there tech level against magic! i calling bull shirt '' MA5 was made in The MA37 (designated MA5 by the Marines and the Navy) first entered service with the UNSC in 2437. It has remained the primary service rifle of all branches of the UNSC ever since. and 13,000 years in past. think don't add up. if say Cryo-chamber! it won't work Cryo-chamber won't last that long. and ship be long rust up.
4050649 yes ? If there is places you think I could work on tell me
4051131 yeah, didn't have a proof reader until chapter four and my iPod is an ass. (Only thing I have to type on.)
holy shit didn't really see that coming
4052727 see what?
4052738 Celestia kissing him I should have been specific
4052748 oh, oil thought you ment her being Luna's mom and not her sister.
4052805 okay then i didn't pay attention to that part
4052942 SURPRISE!
"What a twist?!"
Shut the buck up shamilong!
4081778
4081778 yeah, it was my first chapter, I've improved and got a proof reader since
She killed off an ENTIRE RACE because her lover died?
THAT'S FUCKING SICK! Okay?! That is SICK. And the protagonist is just OKAY with that?!
That's wrong. Okay? That is WRONG.
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTT?????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!!!!?!!!!?!?!?!?!?!? LUNA IS CELESTIA'S DAUGHTER, AND LUNA IS HALF HUMAN WHAT!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?
4050670
MA5 fire erupted and killed the human mean you had to kill 38 billion in possibly not with there tech level against magic!
i calling bull shirt '' MA5 was made in The MA37 (designated MA5 by the Marines and the Navy) first entered service with the UNSC in 2437. It has remained the primary service rifle of all branches of the UNSC ever since.
and 13,000 years in past.
think don't add up.
if say Cryo-chamber! it won't work Cryo-chamber won't last that long. and ship be long rust up.
7139278 plot devices. Deal with it.
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