I'm liking this so far, although, why make Trevor not Trevor? Wouldn't just putting the real Trevor from the game instead of a cosplayer be more effective?
• Character who's evil from the start • MC doesn't appear in times long past and meets Celestia and Luna "when they were young" • MC doesn't have barely justified plot-device grudges (in this case, it's meth, and Trevor hates everyone equally, so it's a very good justification for the animosity)
As far as "League Of Humans Acting Villanous" goes, this is damn original. And a lot more well-written than a few I could mention. You have my attention and my fave, good author.
4054705 Sort-of... Damon/Trevor was sent to Equestria a few seconds before Discord was set in stone and was set in stone mere seconds after the event, so there was no way he could've know that he was asleep for a thousand years. Celestia and Luna saw him as residual chaos magic that Discord made and placed him in the garden. They had little idea that this was a living human being, let alone a psychotic methhead.
Point is, thanks for the praise, and I'll finish a chapter by my Birthday, March 14th.
Interesting!
4024584 No, it's low quality piece of shit!
No seriously, thanks, but this isn't up to my standards.
The next one will be better.
Can`t wait for the next chapter.
Seriously...
I'm liking this so far, although, why make Trevor not Trevor? Wouldn't just putting the real Trevor from the game instead of a cosplayer be more effective?
• Character who's evil from the start
• MC doesn't appear in times long past and meets Celestia and Luna "when they were young"
• MC doesn't have barely justified plot-device grudges (in this case, it's meth, and Trevor hates everyone equally, so it's a very good justification for the animosity)
As far as "League Of Humans Acting Villanous" goes, this is damn original. And a lot more well-written than a few I could mention.
You have my attention and my fave, good author.
4053889 In that case, we wouldn't have the more analytic perspective we have now. Hell, we'd be lucky if the text was written in Wingdings.
4054705 Sort-of... Damon/Trevor was sent to Equestria a few seconds before Discord was set in stone and was set in stone mere seconds after the event, so there was no way he could've know that he was asleep for a thousand years. Celestia and Luna saw him as residual chaos magic that Discord made and placed him in the garden. They had little idea that this was a living human being, let alone a psychotic methhead.
Point is, thanks for the praise, and I'll finish a chapter by my Birthday, March 14th.
When's the next chapter?
4240880 Not for a while, I'm planing on writing a new chapter for two of my non-pony fanfics first before anything else.
After that, I might do a chapter of Six then write a chapter for this, then my NZ story.