Prisoners of Equestria:

by Ponyess

A Warm Pink: 3

The door slammed open with the merry jingle of a door shim. That much had been expected.

Inside, there is a single pink pony, tending the counter. Cakes and cookies lining the small store.

Ofhorse, there is the small room, where one could sit and enjoy the pastries, while enjoying a chat.

I could see a whole section of Cup Cakes. The next was lined with Muffins. Just as my eyes hit the line, I could see Dinkies eyes light up. Something told me she enjoyed them, when ever she had the chance. I guess I had enjoyed a few in my day, even if I couldn't recall most of the times, just as I can't for my life recall which one I had preferred. Not even if my life had depended on it.

“Hi, Pinkie!” Dinkie exclaimed, the moment their eyes met.

“Hi, Dinkie!” Pinkie replied.

“I brought a new friend with me today, Pinkie. I wanted for the two of you to meet. If for nothing but the reason, I know how you love to meet everyone. A new pony should come your way?” Dinkie chimed.

“Who's your new friend? Pinkie responded, with a thrilled tone of her voice, as the statement sank in.

“Hi, Pinkie. I'm Hoof Shine! I moved over her with my parents, after Hearths Warming Eve!” I responded.

“Hi, Hoof Shine, nice to meet you!” Pinkie exploded, and a bright smile all over her face.

“You're the pony who helped stop both Nightmare and Discord?” I uttered.

It's just somewhat strange to find a hero like Pinkie Pie working in such a simple place, when she was such a famous historical figure, even in her youth. You never saw heroes among common ponies, for all I knew.

“That would be me, even if I did not stop either of them all by myself, I had help from my friends, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Apple Jack and Flutter Shy. I couldn't have done it without them. Not even with the Elements of Harmony!” Pinkie pie pointed out.

“I'm still impressed to see a hero before me!” I told her.

“I guess I shouldn't complain. I work here, because of my Element; Laughter. Here I can get to know everypony. From here, I plan all the parties. I spread joy to all and everypony!” she just responded.

“Parties, for everyone?” I asked.

“In this case, the next party would be the welcoming party for you, and your family, since you just arrived!” Pinkie informed me.

“That sounds like fun!” Dinkie and I responded in chorus.

Then again, how about the two of you pick a muffin, I feel in the mood to spread the joy. I know you'll enjoy yours, Dinkie!” Pinkie stated.

I took the time, going over all the muffins waiting for somepony to enjoy it. There were so many, too many by my perspective, but I kept it to myself. In the end, I picked a blueberry. Dinkie had already picked hers, and pinkie had placed it on a small plate for her.

We both left her to go back to her work, and planning for the party. There is a nice table by the window. That's where we landed.

Comments

[Ponyess]

3774079 if that's what you mean, I fixed the first. Not sure how much it improve on the overall enjoyment of the story, but i fixed it.

If there is anything else, please feel free to point out what you find?

I hope I can make it feel right, for each and every character in the story.

[TBear]

Spelling Errors I noticed.

ofcause needs to be changed to ofcourse

poni is spelled pony

Element; Laughter the semi-colon does not need to be there make it a comma.