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Not gonna read this, but if you're not gonna write sex, use "Teen" instead of "Mature". The sex tag goes with both.
i love it this is funny. yes crude humor, sex jokes, violence and gore, but that shits everywhere so i dont mind keep going.
I love this story and i cant wait for the next chapter
im enjoying this but i can see why people dont like it. Your 2 buddys arent really doing much, forgot they were even part of the scene a few times. Your MCs personality apears to be nothing more than that of an angry child. And you moved away from being applejack really fast which probably was a draw to a large number of potential fans. Oh and some minor logic errors such as why the mc was bandaged when he can just respawn.
TL;DR your mc is trying way to hard and comes across as 2edgy4me and your supporting characters are almost invisible at times.
...okay
LOL