• Published 27th Dec 2013
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Ballad of the Immortal - pepdog1



Equestria and all that lived in it are dead. But there is a group of ponies who can't die because they are immortal, and they yearn for death... But which would you rather, finally dying, but for a price, or living forever with the ones you love

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Ending No. One: Up In Heaven, Finally

Twilight turned towards the last grave, Spike's, and remembered how sad she was when he died when the meteor hit Equestria, killing everything. She had decided.

"I want to go to be with my friends. I want to become mortal."

Then she turned to Cadence and Shining. "If, that's OK with you two..."

"Twilight." Shining said. "Nothing would be better than to finally be free."

"It will be done." Celestia said, spreading her wings as her horn started to glow. Luna did the same. Both alicorns closed their eyes tight as they concentrated hard. there was a bright flash of white, and as the two sisters open their eyes, the trio of ponies dissapeared from view.

"What now, Tia?" Luna asked, uncertainty.

"Now, we wait."


When Twilight opened her eyes, she was in a land of clouds.

"Where am I?"

She suddenly saw something bouncing towards her. It looked like an earth pony with curly hair.

"Pinkie Pie!?!?"

"Hiya, Twilight! Long time no see! We've really missed you."

"Where am I?"

"In heaven, silly!" Pinkie laughed. "Come on, your friends are waiting for you..."

As Pinkie Pie bounced off into the distance again, Twilight looked back. She saw Luna and Celestia, slightly faded, waving at her.

"Thank you. Thank you so much..."

"See you in one hundred million years, my faithful student." Celestia smiled. "Or maybe even sooner..."

With that, the two alicorns disappeared into the clouds, and Twilight walked forward into her new life.

Author's Note:

This ending might get a sequel, but probably not the other. I hope you like it, because I had fun writing it. Also, tell me if I have many spelling/grammar mistakes. Thanks for being so committed.