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Bravo sir
"The" should probably be "a."
There probably should be a comma between "beneath" and "begging."
You need a comma between "drool" and "but."
Maybe "hopeless" should be "helpless?"
There should probably be a comma between "restraints" and "he."
"Be" should be "by."
There should probably be a comma between "night" and "your."
I have gotten so use to reading male/male stuff that it no longer seems awkward to do so. I feel like I am really going as a person, and it is all thanks to you. Thank you, Kaidan, for making me a better person. KBO.
You wrote this part too well for my body to care that I'm not into M/M.
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I added some non-clop chapters to it and changed the order of some of the chapters at some point after sending to eqad. It's still 61% clop.
Super stories, is there gonna be follow up to orphy's bundled joy??