shrouded in secrecy, and with a shattered mentality, can he walk on the road to recovery and put the pieces together and maybe find love along the way?
Look mate the first thing you need to do is revise your previous chapters and check for errors. Next is to also check for spacing issues, the first chapter was full of it. Also quick note: 'Thoughts' "Speaking" "Yelling!" This is the basis of communications that's most fanfics use in their stories, it helps a lot to people who we're confused like I was. Also there is also scene transitioning, for example -=Later that day=- Or any simple divider, that is all mate.
Out of curiosity if anyone enjoyed the story so far I would appreciate your input on what his weapon of choice should be.
Look mate the first thing you need to do is revise your previous chapters and check for errors. Next is to also check for spacing issues, the first chapter was full of it. Also quick note:
'Thoughts'
"Speaking"
"Yelling!"
This is the basis of communications that's most fanfics use in their stories, it helps a lot to people who we're confused like I was.
Also there is also scene transitioning, for example
-=Later that day=-
Or any simple divider, that is all mate.
3590405 understood. Thanks for the feed back I'll be sure to keep that in mind as I work on the next chapter.
Ok I know I set my ded line for today but I'm going to extend it for a little while longer.
im still alive, and working on next chapter, in taking my time,
I Apologize for the wait, I experienced internet issues. Still going to take my time on the next chapter though.