In my defense on why the story has a lot of dislikes is because of a few mistakes I did. First one is having the character be a Mary Sue. Second..the second chapter. I sincerely implore you read the other chapters before you dislike. (Plus I need an editor if would appreciate the help)

i cant see for the life of me why others would dislike your story just for having a few grammatical errors, i find this story both captivating and entertaining, oh and sorry i cant be an editor, i do not have the time for that.

God dammit I need to work on this.