"CADANCE!" yelled Twilight as she desperately looked and ran around the halls of the palace. There was only one room left she has not checked; the mirror.
I am going to take great twisted pleasure in seeing you die!
Sombra just laughed through the pain of his ribs slowly getting crushed. "Because I even if I do die...I still manage to succeed in my primary goal!"
"JUST SHUT UP AND DIE ALREADY!" She yelled as she fired another beam at him.
He would still get what he wanted and Twilight will hate her even more if he did die in the hooves of Celestia.
she was dropped one last time.
although you wouldn't know what it's like since you sacrificed your chances
Possibly decades, maybe centuries, she didn't remember it had been too long.
Superior immediately fell over, dead. "Who...?" were her last words.
"Kage?!" Twilight quickly limped toward him, is Sombra really gone?
Honestly, I'm finding this end fairly mediocre compared to the rest. It felt to me like it all just came out of nowhere.
4305414 I agree it seems to be smashed in to one final chapter
epilogue?
Felt a bit rushed at the end there. An epilogue would help fix that.
Please work on your pacing next time. Slow it down a bit. Okay?
That was good, I like it. Can't wait for the second story of this to be finshed.
Deception....