Chapter 3 - (NO NAME YET)
This part does contain small gore Gore were talking things like
grim dark settings such as killing, ghosts and more, Also known as Twilight's Nightmares so please don't hate me for any of these the story does continue all I want to do is 2 nightmares so yeah, also there small because a dream is about 10 seconds long from what I read so yeah.
Also this was kinda rushed so sorry if any of this is like really cheesy and the end of this chapter is not the best but I can't do awkwardness at all.
"hmmm... I wonder whats in her bag?" She thought to herself before levitating them over and laying them on the bed. She opens the bags and digs around feeling a soft
silk as she levitated it out it was her cape and hat as she started to tear up from thinking she lost them or they got torn, she started to hug them before levitating the hat
on her as it felt just perfect to hold them and smell them as she had a very happy smile*
"wait a second... Whats Twilight doing with them anyway... whats this?" She thinks to herself while looking though the bag noticing some paper and a quill. Her eyes open
spotting something at the bottom of her bag as she used her magic to pull it out it was a book.
"hmmm? whats this?" She opens the first page.
"Twilight Sparkle's Diary" her eyes shot open as she saw what the book was as she grinned knowing she could invade twilight's life, she turns to a page saying nightmares.
her smile grew more wide knowing that she could find out what scares her.
Nightmare #1
It was storming one night at Ponyville as it was dark, you could not see out the window as a lightning strike crashed down slowly waking me up from the bed,
I start to walk downstairs noticing spike was missing as I walk down the stairs I slipped on something as I look down I notice it was blood.
"s-s-spike?" I said while walking down the stairs fallowing the trail of blood as I entered the main room Lighting stuck, I saw a rope with the outline of a body on it,
as the blood trail lead to the rope as the lightning stuck again the rope was there, The body gone as there was blood hoof prints leading to the kitchen.
I heard a voice, a faint whisper.
"You did this to meeeeeee!" The voice said as I took a step back the lightning stuck as the figure stood there looking at the mare before the door behind me opened.
I ran to the bedroom locking the door before.
"Behind you~" I turn back to see it was Trixie as her eyes were outlined with black and cuts over her body as I stumbled backwards before I noticed something, a knife as
she pulled it up and leaped at me pinning me to the floor as she stood over me.
"Chop, Chop Twilight~" Trixie raised the knife before she dropped it as she felt a pain on her neck and woke up.
Trixie was shaking from the dream as she closes it and throws it to the floor, before it opend onto a page as it had the word Love on it. She levitates it to herself as she started
to read on what twilight wrote as she slowly noticed that nothing was there.
"DAM IT!" Trixie said out loud seeing that she found nothing to start teasing twilight knowing who the stallion of her dreams were, she yawns as she was scared to sleep from
what she read. she slowly could not keep her eyes open drifting into her sleep.
Princess Luna slowly crept in though the window, being as quiet as she can as she walks across the room taking the cape and hat from not being able to see Celestia's number one student not being able to sleep, she grabs the cape and hat taking them to Twilight's door as she closes the window behind her.
Twilight Sparkle laid on her bed as the thought over everything the past days, the nightmares and so on but something was missing, she felt it, she knew it was something.
She continued thinking if shes left anything behind or what she felt empty ever since she left the hotel room, she knows what was in her bags at the hospital and made sure
nothing was missing as she checked the checklist she carry's.
"Why is this happening what did I leave behind?" she continues hardly sleeping as she ran over the things again and again as something was missing.
"What could it possibly be" She continued to talk to herself over and over, trying to help herself out she hears a knock at the door, a she gets up and walks to it. she slowly
opens the door to find the purple hat and cape.
"What the?" she picks them up with her levitation spell and takes them inside as the scent of chocolate and roses got in her nose calming her mind, and felt more relaxed and she starts to yawn and walks up to her bed before taking a nice sleep. Luna watched in the distance as she knows Celestia would be happy with her as she took off into the stars in the night sky.
The Sun rose high into the air as the birds start chirping and the flowers woke as it was the first day of spring, Twilight woke up from her sleep in the hotel as she yawns.
she notices shes wearing Trixie's hat and cap as she giggled smelling and she decides to take them back to Trixie. She checkout of the hotel room as she walks to the hospital,
on her way there she noticed a mare that she looked 100% like a mare version of that Stallion she met on the first day but as a unicorn, being taken away as Luna was standing there with the
night guards taking her away.
"Hmmm.." She starts wondering why they looked the same as she headed back to the hospital to see Trixie and return her clothes. When she got there she checked in to find out
that Trixie had been given the all clear and in a hotel somewhere.
"Ohh would you be able to tell me where she might of gone?" Twilight asked the nurse.
"She said something about the a weird hotel which sounds more like a club" The nurse replied.
"What's the name?" She said as the nurse pulled out a book on clubs in canterlot.
"The Bass & Treble located not far from here, like a couple of houses down" the nurse pointed a hoof in the direction as twilight nodded and walked out in that way looking
around at all the places in canterlot as she got caught up by a traffic collision, she saw the mare from before break out of the cart as 3 other pony's helped her one was Aura
and the other was Aura's Friend as the guards surrounded them.
"Hey Autumn Blaze" Aura called out "Remember the spell?"
"How could I forget it" Autumn said as her horn lit up and as a bright light shot out and blinded the guards and every pony around looking as they were gone.
Twilight at this point was more curious then ever as she walked up to the guards.
"Umm Excuse me?" She walked up seeing a white unicorn as she noticed it was her brother.
"BBBFF" Twilight called out as she ran to him helping him up and hugging him.
"Hey twilie" He smiled seeing her.
"soo good to see you again, also who were the 3 pony's here before?" She said and let go of the hug.
"Well you see they, did alot of bad things like Theft, Robbery, Stealing and a lot of other bad stuff, But one guy there denies he did all of it but, As much as I think hes telling
the truth, Orders are orders" Shining says in a kinda sad voice at the end.
"Maybe you should talk to the stallion here before, I think hes name is Aura?" She mentioned
"Yes, but how you know the name?" shining asked Twilight.
"Trixie said she got lost and was attacked as a stallion by that name helped her." She replied in a kind voice.
"Hmmm" Shining started to think as twilight was walking away to find Trixie.
"Well, I need to get going, sorry I can't stay BBBFF" She said in a dull voice.
"How about after my shift here for a bit I'll drop by your house" He happily said back.
"I have a motel since im going to be here a while, its the main canterlot hotel we stayed ages back" She said as she was out of sight as shining went back to hes job.
Soon Twilight reached the Club as she noticed the bouncer instantly let her in.
"thanks" She said as she walked though the door as she heard the Music in the club, She walks around as she sees Trixie sitting at the bar as she approached she noticed she
was a little drunk, but she sat down beside her happily.
"Trixie, you left these behind" She lied knowing she does not want her to know she weared them, as she levitates im out trixie hugged her as a blush came across Twilight's face,
she noticed a stallion walking over as he started talking to the drunk mare, Twilight just waited to see what was going on when in the corner of her eye she noticed someone beside Trixie drop something in her drink.
The stallion walked away as Trixie levitated the glass up but before she could Twilight Split it.
"Whoops, Sorry Trixie my bad" twilight smiles as she picks the mare up off the seat and wraps one of trixies hoofs around her neck as she walked out of the club with the drunk mare.
"Do you know what hotel your staying in?" Twilight asked as she wondered where she was staying.
"I don't *hic-up* know" She was stumbling around twilight as they reached Twilights hotel and took her to Twilight's Room as she rested the mare on the couch and levitated
a blanket over her. After covering the drunk mare she returned to her bed laying down as she levitates a remote over to the bed as she turned on the T.V. (Only due to I cant really think what todo besides that)
She switches to a news station as she noticed her brother on the news as she heard something knock over in the next room as Trixie walked into the room stumbling a bit.
"Ohhh twi*HIC*Spark*hic*le" Trixie said walking over to her as twilight was wondering what she was doing as she saw Trixie lay beside her on the bed as she hic-uped again before kissing twilight lightly on her lips
as twilight blushed deeply as she felt something she never felt before Twilight's crush kissed her, she felt trixie's hoof tail down to her belly as she got up pushing the drunk mare off her after feeling a hoof go lower down her body.
the door knocked as she looked at the time noticing its the time Twilight's Brother said he will be over as she walked over the door and opened it.
"Hey BBBFF" she said with a nervous smile on her face worried about what just happened and the drunk mare in her bedroom as he walked in.
"OHHH TWILIGHT~" The drunk Trixie called out.
"COME BACK *HIC* TO BED~" she continued calling out as Twilight's magic closed the door and sealed it as she saw her brother with a blush and a shocked face.
"I-i-is this a bad t-time?" Shining Armor said from what he just heard as he started to wonder.
Twilight Blushed too as she saw shining's face as she kinda moved back a bit. "N-N-No its not like that, I swear" Twilight Reply's
"It's OK Twilight if your into mare's...J-just as long as your happy..." He said to twilight feeling awkward for being here and hearing that as twilight now had a very bright red across her face which was really noticeable.
"l-l-look, I helped her from the pub and she had no hotel to I brought her here to sleep..." She realized what it sounded like as she just sat there.
"I think I should come back tomorrow...." Shining said as he awkwardly walked out of the room closing the door a twilight sighed and face hoofed knowing what her brother thought, her magic
Stopped as Trixie burst out of there. Trixie approached Twilight as she used a spell she had ages ago to help her try and asleep as she used it on Trixie and she just slept as twilight caught
her with her magic and levitated her to the couch as she returned to bed to think about the entire night over and how to explain this to Shining.
This nightmare was a out take of this fiction at the end I though I might include it so you can choose if you want me to make this nightmare official ^_^
Nightmare #2
She woke up on the floor in her house as she saw her mother, father and her brother as Celestia walked into the room.
"Twilight there's a matter we have to discuss" Celestia said as the family started talking
"I don't want a sister who is into mares I just want to ignore you entirely" Shining said in a mean tone.
"And we don't want you to be our foal anymore, you are disowned by the family" Her mother and father said together
"no longer my student as well" Celestia said to twilight looking down at her.
"I by the name of Celestia Banish you to the moon for the rest of your life" Celestia said as her horn lit and and felt herself go flying to the moon as she woke up screaming.
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i love it and no i don't you to make this nightmare official
3242010 Sure thing thanks for feed back it really means a lot and also the last bit is just for trolling reasons but still it brings a new element and can change the course of the entire story to make it longer and more adventure
3242021 Your welcome for the feed back and what would happen to twilight and twixie relationship if you made that nightmare official
3242039 Well, Lets see umm they could
>They could run away
>Turns into a romeo and Juliet kinda thing how they run away to be with each other
Really its just to try to make more chapter's EG say they did
Twilight slowly starts to cry as she ran out towards the hotel where shes staying as trixie was up with a headache and saw twilight crying. Trixie walked over to find out what was the problem as Twilight told her the whole story including the feeling for Trixie. Trixie lightly blushes as she comes up with a odd idea to run away to manehatten.
Or something along those lines
3242054 ok and i change my mind now i want that nightmare to be official
I don't think that nightmare would fit this story. You never hinted that Twilight is unsure about her orientation, it seemed she accepts it and doesn't fear it. This would be just out of a blue.
Few things to this chapter: The Boast Busters episode takes place before Winter Wrap up, so it really shouldn't be first day of spring. If it were, Twi would be organising Ponyville.
When you don't know what Twilight could do in the spare time, make her read something. It is natural pasttime for her.
It is unlikely that the hospital would have a book about clubs at the reception.
Otherwise it was a really nice chapter. You could have written more about that drink with drugs (like Twilight could yell at those stallions, protect Trixie and call guards) but the development of their relationship is delightfully playful.
Try writing the whole thing in past tense, it will flow better.
3243250 hehehehe I'm actually working on a chapter 3 bonus more like a ALT ending to it there is a bar fight in it as well.
And yes the last nightmare is kinda out of the blue but if you think about it, Twilight over analyses things ever day, the nightmare is just about basically how she likes mares and scared that her family and brother and so on don't accept her lifestyle so its kinda relevant to the story. and i might try past tense but yeah well see how it turns out. Thanks for the feed back and as always. Have a great day
3273539 It seems you are building up material for a family confrontation. The nightmare will definitely influence how Twi's relationship with Trixie develops but don't make Twilight talk about this with her family before she is determined to follow through with her relationship. She wouldn't address such issue if it weren't absolutely inevitable. (just a small pointer, disregard if you have other plans, but give it some thought.)
3274580 Well Seeming how shining saw twilight in a odd place and odd i don't really suggest so, i guess she might just talk to cadence about the whole thing and see how it plays out, or it could go slow really theres 3 ways this could go.
3291115 Talking with Cadance could work. She is a neutral party and princess of all love after all.
3291128 Welp seeming how your glad of this idea i know im heading in the right direction