Shit load of spelling mistake, you forgot capitalize the name. The fighting is great, the minor comedy are great. Over all is good (disregard the grammar) I also recoomend you to add some music, to boost the intense of battle (Add link to Youtube) [Sabaton would be great ]
fuPPINGng CAROLUS!!! is it just called that,or is it actully refering to the MIGHTY AND GLOURIUS KARL DEN TOLFTE OF MUTHERFUPPING SWEDEN? (sorry,i'm just very,very interested of history and being swedish i am pretty excited hearing about an airship that is called ''carolus'' XD
So far, so good
Shit load of spelling mistake, you forgot capitalize the name. The fighting is great, the minor comedy are great. Over all is good (disregard the grammar) I also recoomend you to add some music, to boost the intense of battle (Add link to Youtube) [Sabaton would be great ]
Good to see that the archie is still not falling for any ponies
Anyway good story
I.want.MOORREE!!!!
3024971 Then more shall come!
3025610 yay!!!!!!!
3031341 Starts with D.
3031385 What Thrift Shop reference?
good as always :D nice Chapter man Silky is REALLY dirty but i like her soo much!
dam i love it
Yea Sabaton!!!
3284593 I was going to go with 40:1, but I have other plans for that song.
The humans have returned!
fuPPINGng CAROLUS!!! is it just called that,or is it actully refering to the MIGHTY AND GLOURIUS KARL DEN TOLFTE OF MUTHERFUPPING SWEDEN? (sorry,i'm just very,very interested of history and being swedish i am pretty excited hearing about an airship that is called ''carolus'' XD
Sabaton... dear writer, you have restored my faith in humanity! Also you have made my day.