Pinkie Pie attended to last minute details, everything had to be just right. These were very important guests. Pinkie really wanted to show them a good time. The time had nearly come, she gave a last appraisal of the affair. Maybe one or two more shots from the party canon? At the appointed time of the invitation she looked up.
"Hello! I'm so glad you arrived, I've planned so many games for us! I just felt so bad when Twilight told me I had to make it up to you!" Pinkie's mane was flat and lifeless, however she had a hopeful smile on her face. She could do this. She would make it all better again.
"I never knew I was hurting anypony, Twilight told me I "desecrate all you stood for." I am so sorry, I want everypony to be my friend, I just never even realized what I was doing!"
She looked resolute, holding her head high in determination. There had been wrongs committed, and they would be attoned for. "That's no excuse though, when you hurt somepony you apologize! Then you try to make up for the hurt."
She gave a little pleading look to nopony in particular, hoping for understanding. Her eyes, normally joyful, had become teary. A hitch had developed in her voice as she explained herself. "You see I never really consider my actions, my mind just sort of leaps from here to there with no real regard for where it's been or going. Sometimes when you rush around you miss friends you could have right there! I never should have ignored any of you, you make everypony's life so wonderful and you never get any real credit for it."
She addressed her first guest. This was the one she had offended most often in her life. "I know I weird you out sometimes, I don't know how I do what I do, Twilight says it's impossible. I'm guessing you allow it somehow? You seem to really like me, even if I do avoid and ignore you all the time. You're a true friend, to keep being nice to me when I was not nice back! Thank you for that, I wouldn't know what to do if I couldn't be myself, and I don't know how I could be Pinkie if I couldn't be Pinkie."
She turned to the second guest. She was only vaguely familiar with the existence of this guest, but apparently she had been quite rude. "Twilight says everything I do is against you, I don't mean to oppose you, you seem nice. Twilight seems to be a friend of yours and I trust her, I want to be your friend too! I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings."
She turned to her last guest. Her mane flattened even more, and she wore a hang dog expression. This one... she felt so bad about hurting this guest. "She said she had no idea how my Pinkie sense didn't make you burst into flames too! I don't know how it works, I'm sorry if it upsets you! I don't mean to make anypony angry at me!"
Her mane re-inflated with an audible poof. "Anyway, I hope we can all be good friends now, I don't know how I do what I do, but I want to thank you all for allowing it, I love you all!"
She began pouring cups of punch, and set them in front of three empty chairs. Three place settings were on the table. In neat hoof-writing the names of her guests were written.
"Physics (Guest of honor)"
"Common Sense"
"Causality"
A calender could be seen on the wall. Red Ink marked a date for next Tuesday. "Party for the fourth wall, everypony on the internet invited!"
I expected the party guests she had when the other mane 5 had a party for her...
I was close, I guessed two out of three . Got Physics and common sense, but thought the 4th was the 4th wall. Obviously I should have known that it was up next week. Oh well, as I always say, lololol causality.
I guess a party for her too
Yes! Got all 3, well as long "to act casual" counts as casuality
238317 every party is a party for pinkie, which was why party of one was called party of one.
WOOHOO! Pinkie Pie Party tomorrow. I'm there! Missing Pinkie Pie's Party for the fourth wall would simply be THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!
Alright i gave you a thumbs up just for the promise there might be a 4th wall thing later....crap ill watch this also lol
Yeah, I'm going to Track this just in case you actually do the 4th wall party...
And if I really am invited, I'd love to help out! :D
Your grammar is awful. Fix it.
4/5, fav.
241635 If you'd like to offer some constructive criticism on how to write in character as Pinkie Pie, while somehow retaining proper grammar, I would be pleased to hear it. Failing that I fear it's a cross I must bear. The only way I can properly invoke Pie is to take the grammar, logic, and reason centers of my brain off the hook. I would go so far as to say if you've written Pie with proper grammar you are out of character by default. Thank you for reading.
241657
When writing dialogue, you're allowed to break normal conventions in favor of keeping people realistic and in character. As for the narration, that's something else entirely.
241698 Well I looked over what little narration there was. When I looked at it as a reader vs a writer I could see certain word choices that didn't flow as well as others. If you'd care to give it another quick read I'd welcome your assessment.
I want to go to the party for the fourth wall...
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Me too!