The roar of the crowd was unmistakable as numbers were called out. A teenage boy stood amongst a crowd of his own kin. He hated being sold like he was an object meant for meaningless work. He should be an equal to the stupid pony-blooded humans, yet here he was in this situation. He was not someones slave and yet he was being sold as one.
The dragon-kin teen was still young and strong, he would go for a good price, but why did it matter? He stepped closer to his older brother who he will never see again; that he knew for a fact. With a last look of sorrow and encouragement to stay strong from his brother, the auction started.
"50 bits!" A female called.
"150!" A male protested, pushing the price higher.
"200 bits!" Someone from the crowd yelled, the murmur from the crowd died down giving the Auctioneer ample time to close the deal.
"Sold!" The Auctioneer raised his hand and spoke loudly as he grabbed the chains around the teenagers wrists. He was yanked forward off the stage to the man who had won the auction over him. The teen looked back at his older brother who was looking down at him with tears in his eyes. The boy silently told his brother goodbye for the last time. The dragon didn't dare look up at the taller male that had paid for him, though he could see out from the corner of his eye that he wore a straw hat and had brown hair that trailed down his neck and onto his shoulders and stopped. The steel chain was passed to the male and the money was paid. For the next hour or so the teenage dragon-blood was pulled towards a small farm in the middle of the country. As the fresh slave boy got his first fill of his new dwelling all he could see was cotton fields for acres. He also spied an old wood shed a few yards away from the house. The older man led the dragon slave into the house.
As they entered the house there were three pony-blooded females of different ages standing in the sitting room. "What is this?" The oldest of the females asked. She was a unicorn with a pink horn atop her forehead framed with dual colored purple hair pulled up into a bun. She wore a red and white dress that wrapped around her shoulders and draped down her tall frame, the outfit finished off in fine jewels.
"Our new worker, and your birthday present." The adult male smiled at the second tallest female. The dragon looked up at the girl wondering who his new mistress was. As he got his first glimpse of her he would be lying if he said he wasn't struck dumb by her beauty at first glance. She was tall and drop dead gorgeous. Her hair was purple and curled hanging over her shoulders. She was curvy and was wearing a light and dark blue with yellow dress. It was quite stunning on her the color making her sapphire blue eyes pop. She walked up to the dragon-blooded teen tilting his head up making him look into her eyes. His emerald green eyes stared back into hers as she messed with his spiky green hair. He felt his pointed ears twitch a bit as she poked at it. His scaly light purple tail swished back and forth as she circled around him. "He is a dragon." Explained what the male teen could only guess was this girl's father.
"I've never seen one in person before. He's so. . .different." The 18 year old girl stood back beside her mother looking the other teen up and down examining every detail and feature about him. Her hair bounced a bit as it shown in the sun light. She just stared at him curiously. The boy just stood there unsure of what to do as the girl looked over him. The dragon-blooded teen shifted from his left foot to his right. The chains on his wrists jangled some as he did.
"Time for work." The man declared as he grabbed the chains around the boys wrists and unlocked them. The teenager wanted to run the minute he felt the lock come open, but decided against it when he saw the shotgun on the wall. The door to the cottage was opened and he was taken outside. "Pick as much cotton as you can before night fall." The boys new master pointed to the field. "Here. Use this to carry it." The older male threw a potato sack at the slaves feet. The dragon-blooded teen looked down at it for a bit before picking it up. "When you are done picking you will remove the seeds. Now, get to work." The master nodded before leaving. The boy swallowed before trudging over to the cotton fields.
The sun was setting as he picked a few last bundles of cotton off of the plant. The dragon boy picked up the full potato sack and walked up to the stairs on the porch. Sitting down he grabbed a hand full of the soft, fluffy, white pieces out of the bag. He didn't know how long he had been sitting there picking out the seeds, but when he was finished the moon was high in the sky.
After sweeping the seeds into a bucket that was under the porch, he put the clean cotton back into the bag and tied it so it wouldn't fall out as he laid it by the door. The teen walked into the shed he first saw when he came to the farm. He had been here for a few days now maybe a week, and he hasn't done anything to get in trouble yet. He was thankful for that; he knows what the punishment would be, and that whip doesn't look very welcoming. The dragon-blood laid down on the wooden shelf-like bed that was inside of the shed. He took in a deep breath knowing he had to go back to work tomorrow. His body was sweaty and exhausted. His whole body was sore and his muscles were tense. He was only a slave for a few days and he was completely exhausted already. I hope tomorrow ain't as hot as it was today. The teenager thought to himself before drifting into a deep rest as a breeze drifted through the open window.
Thumbed up and fav'd for the time being. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
intriguing but what the hell how can dovaken lose to ponykeen in my oppinu it would make more sense with the parties roles switched but still it interests me
How can there be both human and anthro tags?
So much potential.
You should divide the text in more paragraphs, its kinda hard to read this way. It looks looks like a wall of text.
Also, use the Enter button more.
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Because they have horns, tails, wings ect.
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XD Thanks for the tip I am still editing this chapter a bit so I'll fix this don't worry ^^ Im used to criticism thats how Ive gotten better at drawing (the cover for this story is done by me and you can also find me on DeviantART same username 15MadyCat)
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Well if you think about it Spike is Twilight's assistant which in some way some might be seen as a 'slave' type situation. And it must be by Celestia's magic or something. I based the slave idea off of early American Slavery. I came up with the idea for this story while learning about it in History.
2840509 fair enough but dragons are the strongest there are
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XD I can tell you think that by your name and dont get me wrong I love dragons but it just seems a bit more logical
2840562 read my story and I will prove you wrong
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Okay After I finish with the "Twilight's Treatment Vol. 2" update
2840603 you read that as well a Spike fan as well ay
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Im not sure I understand your wording? Do you mean I read it as well as Sparity fanfiction?
2840892 no Twi's treatment volume 2 and I was trying to sound like a Canadian
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I noticed that XD but you said "as well a Spike fan as well" and I am a bit confused by it
2840922 Spike is the only reason I'm a brony period
interesting idea, I'd love to read more... but it kinda makes me wonder three things: why the dragon-people are the slaves in the first place, what his past is and how he became a slave, and why I feel like I've read stories with the same premise before, but can only think of "the prince and the pauper"
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XD ohmygosh are you serious? Thats good and bad in so many ways
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1. This is based after a pony vs dragon war. The ponies won and made the dragon people their slaves (I based this story off of American Slave History a tad bit) Also the idea of dragons being the slaves comes from the fact that Spike is Twilight's assistant which some may think is just a lighter version of slavery, but with more emotional bond and less punishment and more motherly attachment or sisterly however you see it.
2. He was taken from his home in the Dragon Kingdom and shipped to Equestria where he will serve as a slave for his life (I will add no spoilers in my story)
3. Im not sure about that one. I only got this idea from my American History class and I have never read any other stories like this one. Believe me this will be different. There is a very strong message in it which you will see later in the story.
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1) I get the idea, but I don't see much of how it ties to the american slave history (other than the fact that it included slaves)
2) I would've liked that to be the emotional backstory that he tells Rarity in detail when she asks about his life, and it's kept a secret until then, especially from the readers (you know what I mean)
3) I mean that I feel like I've read the story where the servant falls for his/her master and bla bla bla
This story's potential, I will read your work, so good luck. I liked the story base.
Okay, my interest is caught. I wanna see more.
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1. I dont think it really does I just got this idea from American Slave History
2. You have good hypothesis's shhhhh
3. Yeah I guess that the idea is kind of old school and done before
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3) but that doesn't mean people don't want to read it, especially with a good writer
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Yeah I need to get better dont I? XD
2843503 everyone could get a little better, even Einstein wanted to be better with mathematics and didn't even accept quantum physics because he couldn't understand anything about it
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Indeed, just need time and exp, like anybody in this site. Anyway, good luck making this fic-i sure need that in my fic-
mfw i can relate
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Is it wrong that I laughed pretty hard at this? I feel so bad XD
I'm a tad confused....if her father is giving spike to her as a gift, why is it that he works the fields for her father? Would it not make more sense to have him working in the house or running errands for Rairity?
Otherwise very good,I'm just...confuzzeled