Trixie takes off her apron and walks towards the door. “I may not be back when you get home, I’m headed back over To Rarity’s to finish my dress, plus I have to go to the market. The Great and Powerful Trixie needs some peanut butter crackers.” Trixie walks out the door as twilight finishes her meal.
...Well...that was unexpected. Twilight A kept having nightmares, so she opens a portal and hauls tail. Spike, desperate not to have Trixie's heart broken, grabs Twilight B from the other side of the portal. Yet, Spike found something to help with (but not stop) her nightmares. Is that correct? If so, I am very disappointed in Twilight A.
2845141 I hate to say it, but that's correct. Unless, the Twilight that was suppose to marry Trixie (Twilight A) was a total douche and a-hole. However, that can't be the case, because she gave Trixie a chance and wound up falling in love with her. I don't think Twilight A exhausted every resource at her disposal. Else wise, a lot more ponies would have known about her nightmares. However, it looks like the only one who knew was Spike. I think you need a new plot device.
2845321 How about this, she had been kept up because of the nightmares and as a result her state of mind due to lack of sleep stops her from thinking things through clearly, and of course she dosnt want others to fix it she wanted to fix it herself but being unable to focus due to sleep deporvation she was unable to do so then she hit a breaking point and left
In that case, Trixie would have known about the nightmares because they sleep in the same bed. Nothing indicates that she knew about them before Twilight B (the one there now) told her.
2845614 I would like to direct you to this line from part two: Trixie seats herself on the stool. “I-It’s alright….I know how you get with your nightmares.”
...Well...that was unexpected. Twilight A kept having nightmares, so she opens a portal and hauls tail. Spike, desperate not to have Trixie's heart broken, grabs Twilight B from the other side of the portal. Yet, Spike found something to help with (but not stop) her nightmares. Is that correct?
If so, I am very disappointed in Twilight A.
2844955 That explains why I'm seeing Trixie wanting peanut butter crackers in a number of fics all of a sudden.
2844955 I saw that too!
2845003>>2845007 Yeah, I would've preferred it be something else, perhaps...bananas?
2844982 Yes well err...that was because of a poorly written plot device
2845141
I hate to say it, but that's correct. Unless, the Twilight that was suppose to marry Trixie (Twilight A) was a total douche and a-hole. However, that can't be the case, because she gave Trixie a chance and wound up falling in love with her. I don't think Twilight A exhausted every resource at her disposal. Else wise, a lot more ponies would have known about her nightmares. However, it looks like the only one who knew was Spike.
I think you need a new plot device.
2845321 How about this, she had been kept up because of the nightmares and as a result her state of mind due to lack of sleep stops her from thinking things through clearly, and of course she dosnt want others to fix it she wanted to fix it herself but being unable to focus due to sleep deporvation she was unable to do so then she hit a breaking point and left
In that case, Trixie would have known about the nightmares because they sleep in the same bed. Nothing indicates that she knew about them before Twilight B (the one there now) told her.
2845614 I would like to direct you to this line from part two:
Trixie seats herself on the stool. “I-It’s alright….I know how you get with your nightmares.”
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Well, I feel sheepish.
Fair enough.
Loving the story