Good so far, but what are you going to do with this?

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Thank you!
Also, I'm probably going to write a few more chapters. I'm already writing the second chapter!

Can't wait for the next chapter... teehee

By god!!!! This was just amazing!!!! I made it only half way through band read the rest later!!!! God dam that was a good chapter!!!

Not bad, almost jumped the wagon when Vinyl thought of drugging and raping Octavia in passing but I was able to get back into the story.

Would suggest trying to make smaller paragraphs.

Oh my.

That was the hottest thing I've read in a while.

I gladly bestow unto you my like and fav.

Oh goodness. I'm glad I found this. I thought I'd read a chapter before sleep, but screw sleep. I'm a sucker for OctaScratch.

Slightly raced sex scene but all in all amazing story, love everything about it and can totally see Vinyl as a tease.

My goodness just a few looks at one another and needed desire for each other
next thing I know, things get real intense(kinky if you'd prefer)

4003993 So am I. Also Derpy Whooves.

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If I had a dollar for every time I've been in your situation, Id be rich! But yeah its a great story.