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Untangled Notes - Onyxfire408



A swing musician comes into town as he shows Octavia the love of music and the love she has missed. Octavia X OC, with anthro

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Chapter 2: Family Reunion

Chapter 2: Family Reunion

The train stopped at the band all stood up with their items and waited for the door to open. As it opened, they walked outside and looked around and smelled the fresh air. Loose concealed his guitar in a bag, swung it over her shoulder and shimmered his horn as sunglasses, hat wear, and hoodies appeared for him and all of his band mates. "Here mates, we gotta hide."

"Yea you got that right man, I hate the mare fans." Beat groaned as applied a golfer cap and aviator glasses.

"So we'll see you guys tonight for dinner right?" Brass asked as he replaced his aviators with fake nerdy glasses.

"Yea, maybe we'll invite our cousin too." Silver suggested as she gave the puppy dog face towards Loose who groaned and rubbed his little sister's head.

"Alright sis, we'll invite her." Loose confirmed at the rest of the band applied their disguises. "Okay, soo one of you guys look for a good place to eat out and we'll meet you there. Make sure to give us a call and text us the name of the place." Loose instructed as the band saluted and separated from the sibling band mates.

"So where's our cousin?" Silver pouted as she crossed her arms and had a look of concern on her face.

"No idea, usually she would just-"

"Loose, Silver!" A voice paced as a yellow pegasus mare with a long pink mane and tale toppled over the siblings as she giggled. "It's so good to see you two." She squeed as she squeezed them with all her might.

"GAH! It's good...to...see.. you... Fluttershy..." Loose greeted as he tried to gasp for air.

"Shyshy! LET GO!" Silver pleaded as Fluttershy released her cousins and gave a sheepish grin.

"Oh um.... sorry guys. I'm just really exited to see you two."

"Yea I know right? It's been how long?" Silver asked as the trio of cousins placed a hand on their chins thinking on when the last time they saw each other until they figured it out.

"Last Year." They all simultaneously said as they all laughed.

"So what do you two want to do today?" Fluttershy asked as Silver looked at her older brother.

"Well you two can hang out together, I need to see the mayor about our gig." Loose informed as the two mares squeed and 'eed' and ran off into the town. "Geeze, and I thought Fluttershy was really shy." Loose breathed out as he looked around for the town hall. If he remembered, the mayor said it was the tallest building in the town. He turned a full degrees as he spotted the heighten building as he followed it's view. He reached the structure as he walked inside and approached the desk mare.

"Hello, do you have an appointment with the mayor today?"

"Yes I do, I'm here about the music for the wedding."

"And what is your name?"

"Loose Note." Loose said as the desk mare scanned through her papers and pulled out two papers, the file and a small paper with a picture of Loose.

"Ah yes, the mayor will see you now. And one more thing." She said as Loose raised his eyebrow as she slid a pen and picture and smiled at Loose. "Can I have your autograph please?" Loose sighed but smiled as he took the pen and signed it but paused after his signature.

"What's your name again?"

"Cabby."

"To my first autographed ponyville citizen, Cabby." Loose wrote those exact words as he gave it to Cabby who squeezed the picture on her chest as Loose left her to her starstruck moment. He stopped in front of a room that was labeled 'Mayor Mare's office' and knocked on the door. "Mayor Mare? It's me, Loose."

"Oh! Come in, Come in." Loose opened the door to find the beige coated and gray maned mare mayor sitting behind her office table. She whore a white jacket with a turquoise blouse sticking out her chest. Loose sat in front of her desk as he shook the mayor's hand. "Nice to finally meet you Loose Note was it?"

"Yea mate, good to see you too mayor. Now about this wedding thing, who's getting married?"

"She's a great friend of mine and as well as the bride named Derpy Hooves. She's marrying her stallionfriend Shadow, who was actually her slave until he saved her. From what I'm told."

"Really? Okay then. Is this Derpy Hooves here?"

"Why yes she is. She's in my 'Paper Room'. Derpy, can you come out please? The entertainment's here." Mayor Mare faced the other room as a gray coated pegasus with a blond mane and tail with eyes Loose couldn't even explain. "Meet-"

"*gasp* Loose Note! The lead player of the 'Free Playas'!!! I love your main song '21 Guns'"

"Well it's always good to meet another fan. So you want me to play at your wedding?"

"Yes please, I want it to be the greatest day of my life."

"Well what do you want us to play?" Loose asked as he raised his eyebrow.

"Anything, any song, any note. You are 'playas' right?" She grinned sheepishly as Loose chuckled and shook the bride's hand.

"Well I think my band mates will love that. We'll play what's necessary."

Derpy put her hand in front of her face as it shook with star struck. "I will never wash this hand again." Derpy promised as she fell back and fainted on Mayor Mare's couch, who giggled at her friend's childish reaction.

"Well I'll see you later, I must go now." Loose said applying his disguise leaving the two mares and eventually the building. He walked around in his disguise as he looked around the town, but then a certain beat bumped his ear drum. He listened closely, it sounded like a laser show. He knocked on the door as the music paused and a familiar voice came from inside.

"Who is it?" That voice, it sounded tomcoltish and familiar to him. He opened the door to find a marble white unicorn mare with a electric white mane with purple shades over her eyes. The mare gasped as she lifted her glasses and rubbed her eyes for a clear vision.

"Well if it isn't Vinyl Scratch." Her eyes shrunk but her face grew as she beamed with a smile and ran towards the stallion and slugged him in the arm causing him to yelp in pain. "Ow! The hell was that for?" Loose whimpered in pain, rubbing his arm as the DJ mare laughed.

"For not calling you ass!" She joked as she bawled in laughter.

"You never changed." Loose chuckled as the DJ mare wrapped her arms around the musician.

"Glad to find my best friend from private school is still a child." She teased as she stuck her tongue out.

"Yea yea yea, so you live in Ponyville ah?"

"Yeaaa it's pretty sweet here. So why are you here?"

"Playing at the wedding, speaking of which are you playing there too?"

"Yea. So, you still in the music biz?"

"Yea, you still in the uprising of dubstep?"

"Yea, check out the new wubs I made." Vinyl said as she pulled out her P-pod and shared her headphones with Loose. The wubs combined with the dubs, along with some cubs of the clubs. It sounded just like this. Loose listened as he tapped his fingers and patted his feet to the beets like cleats.

(Like my rhyming? :D)

As The song ending Loose took off Vinyl's headphones and smiled at her. "Nice, pretty cool girl, pretty cool."

"Thanks, you still got that guitar of yours?"

"You mean this?" Loose pointed at his guitar as he zipped open his bag and pulled out a deep sea blue Guitar with a black outline. "Yea I still have it, why?"

"Just asking." Vinyl simply answered in a fun tone as she levitated two beer cans from her mini fridge and gave one to Loose. "Lets catch up." She lightened up as Loose gracefully took the can and smiled.

"I thought you'd never ask." The two chatted like best friends, oh wait, they are best friends. Loose and told Vinyl of how they he first got his guitar and played his first song. While Vinyl had told the time that she had saved all of Equestira with her Bass Cannon. He didn't know who this Discord fellow was, but he didn't really care as he finished his can. "Hey Vinyl, guess what I can still do?" Vinyl raised an eyebrow as Loose crushed the can on his head making it flat as Vinyl couldn't help but laugh.

"You kidding, I can still do that." Vinyl followed competitively as she chugged the can whole and repeated Loose's reaction.

"Impressive. but can you-- *Buuuuurrrrrrrrppp*!!!" Loose belched as the two laughed as the gas.

"Hold on, hold on, I got this." Vinyl said as she pulled out a Colta Cola can from her mini fridge and chugged it whole. She tasted her mouth and widen her eyes as a atomic belch came screaming out of her mouth.

Loose stayed paused for a brief moment as he started to clap slowly, but swiftly proceeded into a quick paced clapping as Vinyl laughed. "That was impressive." The two laughed together as a ringing came from Vinyl's pocket. She pulled out her P-phone as she slid the call.

"Hello?.....Oh hey Tavi......Lunch? Sure, oh and can I bring a friend? No no no, hes not from college, he's an old friend of mine......Really? Thanks, see ya later Tavi." Vinyl finished her phone conversation as she beeped her contact shut as she smiled at Loose.

"Sooooooo...... Lunch?" Loose guessed as Vinyl smirked and grabbed Loose by the wrist and dragged him outside.

-----Meanwhile with Fluttershy and Silver-----

The two cousins were walking down the road as they approached the outskirts of the small town. They chatted as if they were sister. Fluttershy had told her tales to her cousin, especially the one with the dragon she scared off. "Wait, you scared off a dragon!?" Silver exclaimed as Fluttershy shrunk back and smiled with small embarrassment. "How in the bucking Celestia did you do that!?!?"

"Well I uh.... kinda used "The Stare" on him after he attacked my friends."

"Sweet Celestia Shy, I thought you were super shy." Silver chuckled as Fluttershy continued to shrink.

"I uh.....am still......shy..." She said in a shy tone as Silver smiled.

"There's the Fluttershy I know and love." Silver smiled as the two reached to a fair distance outside of Ponyville. There Silver saw a small plot of acre with a river flowing under a bridge which led towards a nature surrounded cottage. There were fresh water fish in the river, rabbits, mice, and beavers all living around the cottage, along with birds flying and hovering around the cottage. Silver's jaw dropped at the sight of how many animals there were. "Holy Celestia ShyShy! That's a lot of animals!" Silver admired as Fluttershy giggled.

"You know of my love for little creatures and animals."

"Well duh!" Silver deadpanned as the two entered the cottage. Silver placed her belongings down as she soon slacked on the couch. "Ahhhhh! I always love your furniture! I don't know how a couch can be sooooooooo soft!" Silver moaned in relaxation as she began to sprawl around Fluttershy's couch.

"Well uh....It's because of it's partially made of clouds....and stuff... And the clouds are inside the cushions so it makes you feel like your sleeping on a cloud." She informed as Silver coated her self all over the couch.

"I call the couch!!! Thank Celestia Loose isn't here yet." Loose reserved causing Fluttershy to giggle. Suddenly, a knocking came from Fluttershy's door as she flew over and opened her door to reveal a Pink earth pony mare with a magenta cotton candy like mane.

"Oh hello Pinkie." Fluttershy greeted.

"Hiya Fluttershy, I just came to visit and-" She was cut off as she found the silver colored mare and smiled deeply. She soon zoomed towards the mare and placed her face mere centimeters from hers causing the mare to feel creeped out. "Hi my name is Pinkie Pie! Who are you? I've never seen you before! Are you new here? What's your name? Do you like parties? Where are you from? Do you-" The pink mare was soon interrupted as Silver shielded her mouth with her palm.

"Please, just, shut it..." Silver pleaded in a polite tone and for the sake of her ears. "Now I'm going to let go of my hand now, once I do, just ask only a few questions. Understand?" Silver said with serious eyes and the pink mare mumbled in confirmation as she released her hand.

"Hi, so what is your name?" The pink mare asked, slowly than her previous self.

"My name is Silver Note. You?" Silver gestured.

"My name is Pinkamena Diane Pie, but my friends call me Pinkie or Pinkie Pie, whichever works. So what are you? And how do you know Fluttershy?" She asked pointing at the butter pegasus mare.

"I am a travelling musician along with my friends and brother. And I'm also Fluttershy's cousin." She informed as Pinkie's jaw dropped and gasped for about 10 full seconds.

"Whaaaaaaaaaat!?!? Why didn't you tell me Fluttershy!!!" Pinkie yelled at Fluttershy as she grabbed her arms and violently shook her non-stop. She continued to shake in as Fluttershy's face started to turn to decay as Silver quickly grabbed Pinkie's wrists.

"Pinkie SHTAWP!!!" Silver Pleaded as she pointed at her cousin who was on the verge of a dam breaking with overflowing decay. "You'll make her puke!" She pointed at Fluttershy who was on the verge of vomit. She look like she would puke any second no-

"BLaaaaaaaghhhh!!!"

Too late -_-

Pinkie and Silver both hissed as the floor was covered in vomit. Fluttershy felt faint as she fell back, but was soon caught by Silver's magic as she placed her down on the couch. The two mares looked at eachother with the same look.

"Cleanup?" Silver asked as Pinkie knodded as she pulled out a few cleaning supplies and started cleaning up their mess.

Author's Note:

So yea posted this with rhymes because of the Rhyme Like Zecora Day. And uhhh yea, didn't expect Fluttershy to be their cousin right?