Well, this is going to be an interesting little adventure, isn't it? I can't wait to read all of this.

2662659 I hope it's up to your standards

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1w, 6d ago

How the fuck?

2723849 he gave him the password to read it unpublished probably

Nothing like a good fetish from the internet to make yourself feel alittle more normal.

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Nope. I don't really now how it happened. I think I got here the day it started though.

not bad. guessing you've never been hard dominated before but not bad at all. you have the fear down well, the hopelessness pretty good. the loss of dignity was well handled but a bit brief. as you said though you tied it up quick. she should have released him at the end but collared him. binding to service adding humiliation and swearing to secrecy. i could be wrong on this but raising a red mark on a black coated pony, not sure. great use of toys though.

never mind just checked your bio page,if its true this is pretty damned good

um no i'm usually into clopfics but this was bad try to not sugar coat it and be creative with it oh and be very descriptive as best you can
HAVE FUUN

I like buuuut it had to many grammar errors!

I've read it a second time and it is kind of a piece of shit....... If you wanna make more go for it but not many people are going to read it. Just being honest

2775048 Yeah the twilight chapter really sucks. I Rushed it waaay too much. However, i plan on making the Rainbowdash chapter of much better quality

You could just rewrite the chapter

2779774 that too

Okay I'll remember to read the next chapter!

I was really getting anticipated on the RD chapter but you still haven't written it so yeah............ All I'm saying is...... Ugh JUST HURRY UP PLEASE!

2847744 yeah, sorry about that, i've been working on a different story and it escaped..my..mind.

Well no problem... And what does "watching" me mean?

2848496 yeah......... i have no idea why i did that. Speaking of wich, you seem to know about this kinda stuff, so would you mind proofreading it for me?i'd appreciate it alot. (no pressure though)

2848747 so you want me to rewrite it for you and then send it to you or would you like me to post it in my own work?

2853423 you can forget about it, i have no idea what i'mm talking about.

2855273 no it's fine I'll help you rewrite it!

GAH THIS IS TAKING WAY TOO LONG TO MAKE ! >:(

3268925 Well thank you my dear friend, That means alot

It's a shame that you cancelled this, it was quite a nice read

3553505 yeah, well don't be too disapointed, ive been considering resuming my work on this

oh please do so ^^