Quite fast paced but I liked it.

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Really? the entire last chapter I felt like i was going slow.

2709086 It wasn't too fast paced I just thought it could have been padded out a little more.

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Ah alright, yeah. That I understand, it's not my strongest point in writing.
Thanks though!

Yay! When is Vincent gonna change!
I want to read the look on his/her face when he/she realizes he/she is a lesbian.

2709086 hey ive been wondering. ive just read this story and i am hoping you are going to continue this. but the thing that's also bugging me is the song parody you keep mentioning throughout the story. is it by any chance... this one?

and another question. is the setting of the animation of this song the one you used for the octy/vinyl backstory?

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Yes indeed, I thought i made some note of that being one of the inspirations in the description... Hm..

I really do need to pick this back up, the main story of 5score is getting close to it's ending... and I've got only one character about half way done...

Regardless I will continue as best as I can.

3344375 oh you did? i guess i just didnt notice. heheh but i dont see it so maybe you forgot you took it out? the only connection to the song i can make is from the picture.

STILL. I am also awfully happy that you are still going to try and continue this to your extent

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Just happy to see people want more, to be honest. Nothing will happen tonight cause I have work tomorrow, but tomorrow afternoon once I get home I'll start on chapter 4

3344505 oh yey i hope you get a lot of inspiration to help you

Holy nailed it characterization Batman

can't wait for the next bit

You made me fall out of my chair. MORE!!!!!!