The three unmarked chapters below are the product of two days of solid re-writing by the incredible Loyal2Luna and myself (I posted blogs about her coming aboard and the rewrites) so please enjoy the fruits of our labor and comment a lot!
Yours truly Ed2481
So a complete rewrite?
Thank you for the piece, I will enjoy!
A re-write by Loyal2Luna? This should be interesting.
*Grins evilly*
You have no idea what you have just unleashed upon yourself...
Yay I beat the first chapter!