I've been doing some introspection on some of my stories and I realized how much I rush certain things, specifically relationships and such, in my other story "Minxy's New Adventure: Reset" I didn't give much build up to Twilight's and Rainbow Dash's relationship, this is due to one of my more common errors as a writer, I thought people would be able to give themselves context and such but I should have been putting more hints and dialogue that would suggest they had feelings for each other,

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So I wanna make my Story "Bardock: Saiyan Warrior of Equestria" Better, so i'll be rewriting the first chapter and adding a bit more art since well, I need to make use of my SFM skills somehow so yeah.