Okay so Radience… my destiny story with our favorite bug. Needless to say I did not like where it was going. I fell into the trap of telling instead of showing, suddenly exposition dumping a lot without time to explore and stuff. I have taken to unpublishing chapters 3 and 4 since those are the problem ones.

With my recent binge back into the world of destiny I want to write more about light bearers.

TRadiance

• MLP: FiM
• Destiny
• Adventure
• Mystery

A failed invasion. A Race scattered. A Queen dead. From the ashes, their last cry of vengeance rises.

• Violence
• Death
• Crossover
• Chrysalis

LSTS Connor · 5.1k words  ·  187  6 · 2.2k views

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