[Geoverse] Part Eight Brainstorming · 10:13pm Aug 6th, 2018
(Yes, I'm still alive.)
You can skip this blog if you care not about my self-insert romantic twaddle.
Stay awesome!
(Yes, I'm still alive.)
You can skip this blog if you care not about my self-insert romantic twaddle.
Stay awesome!
I have slightly extended Chapter Ten of To Friend Is Human, adding in a scene at the party with Twilight's parents and changing the ending. Editing this story, making it ready for printing, is taking a lot longer than I expected, because I keep finding things to change and add.
Well, at least I've got a four-day weekend to look forward to; might actually get some work done.
That's all for now, stay awesome.
Hee-hee, 'plothole.'
Joking aside, I have just amended Chapter 14 of To Friend Is Human to fix a slight issue that I had with it.
Spoilers after the break. If you haven't read Parts One and Two of the series, do not click 'Read More!'
Guess who's back?
Back again?
Geo's back.
Tell a friend.
Yes, my friends, I am back to being online properly! My Internet connection was restored earlier today, and I couldn't be happier.
Anyway, what have I been up to during my two week absence? Well...
* I wrote a new clopfic called Twilight's Surprise.
* I wrote a new one-shot called Eight Bit Versus The Nerf Gun
It can't have escaped your notice that I haven't been around for a while.
This is because I have not had Internet access, due to it being cut off. A new connection - which I am now paying part of the cost for - should be in by Wednesday at the earliest or Friday at the latest.
I hope it's Wednesday, because I'll be in Edinburgh on Friday and Saturday.
I've noticed that a few errors still remain within the To Friend Is Human PDF, such as grammar and formatting, and so I am currently in the process of fixing them. As a result, the rewrite of To Love Is Human is on hold.
I will also be looking through the comments of To Friend Is Human and choosing my favourites, which will be showcased in the updated PDF when it is released.
And, before you ask, EQD haven't gotten back to me yet.
First of all, let me just say that this should be the last time I tag this story.
Anyway, according to my webstats, I see that quite a few of you are downloading PDFs of my stories. So with that said, the new version of To Friend Is Human is now available in this format.
On a separate note... should I submit the newly edited story to EQD?
It is done.
To Friend Is Human has now been 100% edited, fixing all known plotholes and grammar issues. The last three chapters have also been extended with new dialogue. Take a look, and I'll see you in Part Two — because it's next on the edit list.
Chapter 12 of To Friend Is Human has now been edited and extended for your reading pleasure.
I suggest you read it, as it fixes a couple of plotholes.
You've probably noticed that I still haven't finished editing To Friend Is Human, despite saying that I would have done so by... last week, as it happens.
I do apologise for the delay, but I do have my reasons. Chief among them is my volunteer work, but it's mostly down to procastination (and taking time out to write random stories about Pinkie Pie being headbutted).
I hope to finish editing all of To Friend Is Human over the weekend. I will then make a start on To Love Is Human — the biggest change to which will be changing 'Sorou' to 'Ace', as I feel that referring to someone by their last name is just rude (unless you're in the military).
Chapters Nine, Ten and Eleven (AKA the old Chapter Six, Seven and Eight) of To Friend Is Human have just been edited and, in the case of Chapter Nine, extended.
Chapter Eight (AKA the old Chapter Five) of To Friend Is Human has just been edited and extended.
This chapter will hopefully be finished, and then published, later today. Once it's done, the rest of the story will be edited.
I edited this so much, I slashed nearly two thousands words off it!
Coming up next, the brand-new hospital chapters!
First of all, the Valentine's Day story I promised was submitted on February 14th at about 11pm. Not the best time to submit, I know, but it should still be up soon. Part of me doesn't like how it turned out, but I'll let you be the judge of that.
Chapter Three of To Friend Is Human has been edited. As a result of this, Chapter Four has been completely ruined — but I will fix that eventually.
In the meantime, go and read the new and extended Chapter Three!
I am slowly working my way through Chapter Three of To Friend Is Human, and I've decided something.
As you all know, Celestia is the first Princess that Geo meets — he doesn't meet Luna until Sharing The News (which I still plan to merge with To Love Is Human).
Not only have I edited it, I have also added 531 words to it!
Also this:
Expect these new chapters soon!
The edited (and slightly extended) Prologue of To Friend Is Human has been published, just in case you didn't see it in your notifications (I'm not sure if unpublishing and republishing works like that).