Writing: How I screwed up "The Mailmare" · 2:54pm Apr 28th, 2016
I have a probably stupid habit of revising my old stories, especially the long ones. Usually I just reword; sometimes I emphasize something different.
(Guys. I had Celestia say there were 6 ponies in the room in "Mortality Report" when there were 5 ponies in the room. None of you were OCD enough to catch that? Seriously?)
I was going over "The Mailmare" and got checked hard. That first scene. Urgh.