I finally have a FIMfiction reader that I know in real life! This wonderful person is such a bundle of color and energy that everyone she comes in contact with leaves feeling blessed. I am so unbelievably lucky to have met her, and to have her as an encouragement to my writing, and indeed she is such an blessing to my life. I consider her my 'Pinkie Pie' friend.

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...Or maybe it's just to prove that I am working on the next chapter, and not waiting for a month to go by...

disclaimer: The writer reserves the right to change, alter, or delete any part or parts, up to and including all of what is written below.

“I was told you weren’t wearing an undertail.” Celestia said quietly.

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Because this issue has come up again from a pre-reader, I feel I must address it more completely here.

Princess Celestia and Princess Luna had parents who gave them powerful magical weapons before they left. These weapons were imbued with the powers they (their parents) had, namely, the power of the sun and the moon. Or Solar and Lunar magic, if you prefer.

Point 1.> The weapons were given to the both of them.

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The Abduction Of Luna needs OC's! Anyone have an OC that has an interest in law enforcement, especially forensics or pathology?

Send in your info now!

If I can keep to my plan, I will write at least a page a day (250-300 words)
I will make no promises on days that I will update my stories, but with this as a guide, you can expect that long waits from now on should precede longer chapters.

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Next Chapter!!!
We are going to hear from Luna. The next chapter, I hope to post next week, and it will be told from Luna's perspective. That is the main reason why I did a chapter break here. Not just to add another Cliff-hangar.
So, I'm back, and we are nearing the end. With the luck of the Irish, I hope to finish this by the end of the month.

I guess I had to take a vacation from The Abduction Of Luna for a while. I have been writing; I've been working on two other stories. One that have been in my head for a while. And the other is was inspired by another writer's story. Neither is published. I am not allowing myself to publish anything else until TAOL is complete. So all you Abduction of Luna fans may breath easier.

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I didn't get as far as I had expected in "The Abduction of Luna" plot in this chapter, and so the next chapter will have the information you all seek.
I hope that the length and quality of this chapter, "Cave Mutiny", is enough to convince you to forgive me.

I was the only one pre-reading this, and I did so in a rush to get this done for Princess Luna's birthday, so more mistakes than usual may have gotten through.

If I don't submit anything in the next few days. Have a Merry Christmas!

So, I just posted a short chapter to "The Abduction Of Luna".
I left this off of the last chapter because I had felt so emotionally drained after completing "Dark Thoughts".
Seriously, I have never before had such a feeling of being...empty.

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So I was writing the next chapter for the Abduction of Luna, and after I had completed what I had wanted, I did a quick word count. 793.
Well, no big deal. I knew what I had was just the bones and I had to flesh-out and expand on almost every paragraph.
Second pass: 950
Third pass: 998
Hmmm. Starting to get worried. I haven't even broken a thousand words yet. Is this extremely important chapter going to be irritatingly brief?
Fourth pass: 1048

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I just realized the Abduction Of Luna would have the acronym AOL... I guess I'm stuck spelling it out.

So I have the next chapter almost finished, and I can't remove the nagging doubt: Does this chapter belong?

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New chapter almost done.
Mostly.
I sent what I have completed to The Great Eater for a pre-read.
I plan on posting on Friday, or Saturday.
And yes, the new chapter is called Deja Vu.

So have you ever experienced deja vu?

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New chapter has been sent to TheGreatEater for pre-reading. I'm ready to publish, but I will be patient. This chapter: "Cold and Afraid" focuses on Millstone and his background/motivation. It was a bit difficult for me, as the story Millstone tells is familiar to me. As such, I think I kept losing touch with the characters. I wrote, got stuck, erased, got stuck, wrote, got stuck, rewrote and finally got my breakthrough.

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A little glimpse at my method...
Okay... I want to write a story involving Princess Luna getting kidnapped...
Obviously I need a kidnapper. It should be somepony unassuming, somepony on the inside.
A mare. Yes, definitely a mare and a servant.
Great! Yeah, I think this will work. Now to think of a name!
What the hell should I call her?

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No new chapter yet, but I did the re-write of chapter one and reformatted the entire story. Let me know if you like the blocked look over the indents I had before. Chapter four will follow shortly, now that I no longer have to worry that Tiara (Silver Chalice) will be contradicting elements of the story already written.

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Oh great! I just had an amazing idea that is going to force me to re-write the first chapter of this story! My new idea mainly concerns the origin of Tiara and her motivation, and I think it provides a more realistic means for how she infiltrates the Palace, (which I intentionally left vague).

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