The Abduction of Luna: Update! · 10:50pm Jul 26th, 2014
New chapter has been sent to TheGreatEater for pre-reading. I'm ready to publish, but I will be patient. This chapter: "Cold and Afraid" focuses on Millstone and his background/motivation. It was a bit difficult for me, as the story Millstone tells is familiar to me. As such, I think I kept losing touch with the characters. I wrote, got stuck, erased, got stuck, wrote, got stuck, rewrote and finally got my breakthrough.
Hopefully the characters remain realistic and have not suffered OOC moments. (Yes, Luna is acting OOC, but for good reason, I promise!)
Anyway, the next chapter is: (Gasp!) Luna and Thunder! Yep, let's find out his story. Are those charges against him real, or imagined? So far, I think we have learned how difficult it is to hide secrets from the Princess of the Moon! And how hard it can be to sleep through the night!
BTW... Character descriptions will be inserted into the chapters the characters are introduced, eventually. I will blog when I do.
