Today I received a gift art piece that is an illustration of Chapter 12.

Spoiler alert in case you haven't read the story yet!!!

This is when Crystal opened the toilet stall door and was startled when a skeleton tumbled out.

Image by Vector Brony.

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Rough draft, not even a single 1k yet. Quick question to you, the readers.

Does what I have so far embody the ramblings from a little girl? It's not too far disconnected that it only feels like someone intentionally writing the part and trying to make you clumsily believe it, I guess is what I'm trying to avoid.

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