Sample of "Equestria: Civil War" rewrite · 11:18pm Sep 27th, 2016
Fast as lightning, sharp as a sword
Here's a clip of a rewrite for chapter 2 of "Equestria: Civil War". I decided to go through with the idea of having a new character take on much of Celestia's position and lines, so as to keep the harshness necessary, but keep Celestia in-character.
Here it is:
“Aww, don’t be such a frowny-puss!” Pinkie chirped. “I don’t think it really was that bad!”