So, my first 4 chapters have been reposted with their corrections. If you've already read it, you won't be missing anything other then some grammar and spelling error corrections. The story and its events have not changed.

That's all.

Okay, so it's been almost a month and there hasn't really been anything put out by me since I posted chapter 16. Well, outside of work and all that entails, I also went back and did my own review of my previous works to be handed off to an editor. So, that much has been addressed, and I'm waiting for all of those works to be reviewed before I continue to post much more. Or at least until maybe chapter 12 is reviewed. After that, I might submit the edits and pick up from there.

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So, after some reviews with others, a lot of my mistakes in my previous submissions were pointed out. Seeing that, I will be going back over those submissions to fix as many mistakes as I can, as well as bring in an editor to take a more in-depth review to help me put out the best work that I can.

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I'm still working on my writing process and overall style. I spend a lot of time making sure that everything I put in my story is as accurate as possible. Research on characters from the series, the timeline of events, material regarding the military, and so much more. I have so much planned for this series that I actually keep a separate document with all major events that happen in my story and an outline of future events.

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Sorry if I kept anyone waiting. Wow did this chapter take a lot longer than others. But between work, moving, and getting unreasonably sick, it's not like there weren't reasons. But, at least things are getting a bit more real for our 7 lucky new residence of Equestria.

For chapter 13... We're still in the holiday season, I'm still sick, not done unpacking, and have a lot of other things happening at the same time. So... hopefully between another 7 to 12 days to pop ou the next chapter.

Okay. So normally I try to put out at least one chapter every week to ten days. However, I'm not going to pretend that I'm trampling over too many hearts, what with my three followers and 108 views I've collected over a three-month stretch. I'm obviously not winning over the masses. Not that something like that was ever my goal. Just saying.

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For anyone who may read this, my 10th chapter is done and submitted. I struggled with this one. What I published is my third re-write. The first was far more brutal than it needed to be. The second was clouded with far too much exposition. It seemed to give away too much and the flow fell apart with it.

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So... to anyone who may read this. Chapter 10 is coming along. However, I have a lot going on right now. Work, family, education, travel... a lot, a lot, a lot of shit on my plate. Plus... this chapter has come put pretty harsh. Perhaps "brutal" is a better term, and I might have to rework it.

Otherwise, if anyone cares to leave a comment on what they think so far, please feel free to do so.

My first story was submitted, approved, and published. I'm putting the first two chapters out together due to any real reference to ponies showing up at the very end of the first chapter. The second chapter is pretty much all pon and sets up where this story deviates from the actual series. Multiple chapters are in the works and I want to get on a schedule of at least one chapter a week. There's no guarantee that the time frame won't be more or less than once a week, depending on how much of

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