So a friend of mine looked at the story and, you're not going to believe it, there is still some work to be done. The key item he noticed, at its something that flew way over my head, was dialogue variation. So far (according to my friend), its: "...." x person noted, "....", y person said <- where's the variation? It doesn't feel like full, fleshed out story now that I think about it. So here's what's going to happen: I am going to finish my current editing process with the plan of attack I

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“So I’m standing there, right? Everypony is smiling and looking at me, and I have my lucky bowtie with me. Everything was going exactly as planned, down to the last detail.” Pinkie Pie took a bite out of the cupcake in her hoof and swallowed without chewing. “So I get the microphone, yes? And I take a deep breath? And nothing comes out!”

Lyra gasped and covered her mouth with a hoof.

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Okay so yeah, I’ve been gone a long while. I won’t dwell on it too much because there’s nothing I can do about it now and I’m sure you don’t want to read a million excuses. The holidays, combined with sickness, family drama, and a dash of loss of motivation are the main reasons I left. But I’m back now and refreshed! As the title says I’m really pumped to be writing again and I have a whole new way to go about it/a new mindset. First, I’m going to put a rigid schedule in place to help me keep

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