Hey y'all, as I continue to work on revising Nightshine, I lowered my prices by a lot on Patreon. I realized I maaaay have been a little bold with the previous pricing so I updated it make it available to everyone. Sorry for being a dumb dumb haha
I've begun editing the story and implementing the changes. It's really like putting together a huge puzzle haha. So far, I've unpublished three chapters (shown in the pic below) and edited up to chapter 15, Jason's First Steps. I marked the chapters that I've revised with a (Revised) tag in each chapter's title. Chapters after that haven't been updated/revised yet.
I read every comment and thought a lot based on what everyone said, so based on the last blog (https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/970864/revising-nightshine-need-feedback), I've decided to do a version of option 2; explained below.
I'm thinking about taking out the bits about the bullshit laws making Jason not be able to adopt nightshine without being a thestral himself and about him being able to switch between human/pony. I would love to get some feedback, especially since that idea of mine was met with significant pushback so that I can push on forward and continue writing this story.
Just put up the next chapter on patreon! If you want to read it now, you can pledge here: https://www.patreon.com/theabyss or wait for it to come out in a couple of days.
It's a happy chapter, and I know you guys are gonna love it!
Lily's Confrontation: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/308995/23/my-filly-nightshine/lilys-confrontation
As always, you guys know how much I love comments!
It's done! I got it up to 5k words, and it does a great job of pushing the story along. I spent the last few nights staying up super late (around 2am to 3am each night) working on this chapter, and I must say that it is one of the best ones yet. There's just a whole lot of stuff going on in this chapter, and I really, and I mean really cannot wait to hear what you guys think about this one! It's gonna come out tomorrow or Tuesday, too!