Nightshine Revisions in Progress · 7:53pm Nov 22nd, 2021
I've begun editing the story and implementing the changes. It's really like putting together a huge puzzle haha. So far, I've unpublished three chapters (shown in the pic below) and edited up to chapter 15, Jason's First Steps. I marked the chapters that I've revised with a (Revised) tag in each chapter's title. Chapters after that haven't been updated/revised yet.
Anyways, just wanted to check in with a little progress report! Hope you like the changes I've made so far. Some scenes might now feel a little basic in the story, however, that'll get fixed in the book version when I go through it and flesh everything out just like I did for the book version of I'll Always be Here for You.
You can view the original here: https://fimfetch.net/story/308995/my-filly-nightshine
