Nightshine Changes · 9:36pm Nov 19th, 2021
I read every comment and thought a lot based on what everyone said, so based on the last blog (https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/970864/revising-nightshine-need-feedback), I've decided to do a version of option 2; explained below.
It'll be easier to write more of this story if I do a variant of option two, where Twilight lets Jason be a pony for a while temporarily via a spell that wears off after a few days or so. It'll be good for him to see what life as a pony is like, Nightshine will be able to live her fantasy of winghugs from Daddy, and this also gives me more ideas to write about how Lily only knows Jason as a bat pony.
I'll have to revise other chapters and I'll be unpublishing a few chapters, too (10, 12, and 13). As for the ring allowing him to change back and forth, I still like that idea, though I'm going to introduce it much later in the story or I might not even use that idea at all because I just thought of a great scene to add near the ending.
Chapters 1 through 9 don't need revising so those are safe. I'll have to revise the following chapters to accommodate the deleted chapters and I'll make another post for sure when the changes are complete and when the story reads well. Once that's done, then I'll be able to write new chapters of this story. Further changes to the story, like added scenes and content, will be made available in the book edition.
You can get early access to new chapters of this story by subbing to my patreon at https://www.patreon.com/theabyss . When I finish a chapter, patrons get access to it immediately. That chapter only gets released publicly when the next chapter (of either story) is made available to my patrons, too. I'm going to be swapping back and forth between the two stories (Scoots 2 and Nightshine) until both are finished. I don't currently have anything to offer other than access to the Discord server and the story dev calls right now, but the next chapter already has 1k words already written. I'll make another blog when that one's finished if you don't feel comfortable pledging to a patreon without freshly-written stories/chapters already available.
Thanks for helping me decide on the future of this story and for being a super patient awesome reader.
I can't wait for revices to see what magic you work
No worries, take your time and take care of yourself.
Come on!
I’m really not a fan of a story I already enjoyed changing…. in such a way that I won’t be able to read the original. Can you please make the non-updated version available for reading?
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I haven't changed anything yet, though I'm putting in the changes/deleting chapters today and tomorrow. Save the story as it is now if you want to save it or go to fimfetch.