Editors for my little Fanfic "Enter the Dragon"

the story is simple: human gets punched into Equestria, forcibly alicornized and has to live there until he manages to find a way to get back to his duties without suffering of a painful dealicornization

Duration: from Landing to meeting Princesses Moon & Sun butt

Link (Folder withn the chapters) - Here (it's a Folder)

ways to edit

1. Duplicate the file, then make the changes
2. add the corrected text as comments, I'll do the adaptation.

what I need is a way to make it more english-readers relatable (besides I tend to go overboard some times), a bit of proof reading and gramatical help...

Thanks in advanced, if Anyone is interested post a reply here / message me... as usual, you'll be credited in the Fic itself...