*SWEATING* U-uh... So.... I tried making a fanfic and I am so new to this crap.

Edit: [Link removed since I got the story finally approved.]
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/377937/no-vaccancy

I'm just gonna plop this here to get criticism before I continue on. I don't wanna submit a crummy story....

Well... first you need to somehow make the story visible to the people you want to see it.

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I changed the link. Didn't know it was private... And the fact it's still being approved. This is the non updated doc since I noticed a couple awkward sentencings and slight mispells.

Again, writing isn't my expertise. I made the fanfiction to give it a shot.