People keep disliking my story without telling me what's wrong. My OC is dying from all the hate. He needs love and fast. Please save Wasp

715803
Well, you need an editor for it. I can tell you that much. I've upvoted it out of pity.

715856 But I have edited it. I had my parents proof read every chapter. Only recently have I been importing my chapters into word to compensate for Google Chromes horrendous spell checker.

715874
Perhaps it would be better if you had some other writers take some looks at it.

715803
I added it to my Read later list. The story concept in the summary sounds interesting. I'll check it out when I have a chance.

Don't worry my dear changeling, i will give a try to your story and i can post a link in my story to get my fan to read it

Prepare teh LCMJ to fire {LCMJ means LOVE CANNON of MASS JOY} Aim, load, FIRE!!!!