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I have a small problem. For a later part of one of my Stories I need to write about a gun being loaded (or rather a shot - y know the part of a big weapon like a rifle you pull to load the shot). The question is: how do I express that? The sound of it? Anyone got an idea? Would be rather nice, thanks 🙏

The best I can say from personal experience is it sounds kinda like a heavy *ching*. It’s hard to be more explanatory then that when it comes to that specific sound.

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Well that is still more than my mind came up with. I will See how I will manage it then when I come to it:twilightsmile:

Are you talking about a flintlock or a modern weapon?

For the former, here you have a video where you can see someone shooting a musket. At around 1:45, he cocks it.

https://youtu.be/XHkxYz4Xcmo

Here is an ASMR clip of a ton of rifles being loaded. Hope i can help you

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Glad i could help

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