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Disconnected

Verse 1:
Deep in this forest, where shadows reside,
A fading memory flashed across my mind
Wet, cold, and alone, just a pup without a home
As I shivered and cried from being left behind

But then, gentle hands, a touch that calmed my fright
Calypso found me and cradled me in my sleep
She gave me a home, a haven full of light
And wiped my tears with a promise to keep

Chorus 1:
Was she my savior, my guiding light?
Guiding me from darkness, setting things right?
Calypso, my mentor, with whom I can confide
Disconnected from the world, but forever by her side

Verse 2:
Within her cavern’s depths, time etched in stone
As she raised me with her magic and her care
She spun tales of darkness, of you and your friends' cruel reign
With creatures abandoned and lands left in despair

Years bled together, under her watchful eyes
Muscles honed, fangs bared, trained to make things right
But doubt began to creep inside of dreams I couldn't realize
A gnawing emptiness, a whisper in my ears and mind

Chorus 2:
Was she my savior, or a twisted con?
Were her crystal visions just a scheme all along?
Calypso's teachings, they're clouding up my mind
Disconnected from the truth, a reality I left behind

Bridge:
Her whispers echoed, my memories unclear
Was I her son, or just a weapon forged in her pain?
My mind’s been damaged, my heart beyond repair
Now I can't tell what's real or fake, am I going insane?

[The Mane Six] (harmonic in the background):
There's more to this story, you don't have to face this alone
Let go of your anger, Odium, and let your heart unfold

Forgiveness whispers, lost in raging scorn
How can I mend the world when I'm too broken and torn?

Verse 3:
Now a full-grown wolf, fangs gleaming in the light
With my staff clutched my claw, a burden held tight
Calypso’s pale whispers, a final goodbye
A chilling scream piercing through the darkened sky

Grief, cold and heavy, a weight buried in my chest,
Her final words echoed, a haunted plea:
“Forgive me, son, and make me proud.” her voice in pain from her final rest,
But doubts linger in shadows as I made my leave

Leaving behind the cave, I ventured alone
Calypso's mission, a fire in my eyes
A world stretched before me, vast and unknown
But embers of truth, flickered with hidden lies

Chorus 3:
Was she my savior, or a monster in disguise?
My life was all a lie, beneath tear-stained eyes
Lost in the darkness, a promise now betrayed
Disconnected from myself, a burden I’ve made

What do you think?

7955603
Wow! This song is amazing!

7955603
what feels.....

7955603
Nice work on the lyrics.

7955707
You give off major ‘feels’!

7955833
Oh. Thanks. 👍

7955833
Why do you have major 'feels' about the song, though?

7955982
the intensity, chilling images to start.

7955652
Thank you. What do you like about it?

7956387
It feels like a redemption song and one that is intense.

7956662
Thanks. It's actually a tragic backstory and inner struggle song for a certain character I've created.

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