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Review: The Girl in the Woods

Tags: Sex, Romance, Porn

Summary: A shut in fluttershy that goes to the woods….

Review: Well you got intro trouble again. And now it’s fixed… so, this was an E fiction at one point and fixed it to M.  ok.. So, let’s get on with the fiction…

Yes hmmm….. The grammar seems alright in the end… the flow is pretty swell…. And the character is ok… just a bit awkward in some moments.  It can be pretty hot for the sex scenes… (which is pretty common and normal for any lesbian or straight male users)

Can you jerk off from the fiction yes!...  Does every clop can make you pull down your pants and make it sexy… sometimes no… and this fiction can in some way if you like those sorta of things…. O////O 

Now then for the fiction judgment time.  I give this at least a 6/10 for me. 

7958045 Thanks for this awesome review.

The first chapter of this story is E-rated, it only gets M-rated later on.

This story was a commission. I'm a bit out of my comfort zone when I write normal stories like this one. I did try to subvert it a little, but I had a limit on how far I could go.

So yes, it's a bit of an average story because that's kind of what I was commissioned to do. I'm glad to hear you didn't find any glaring issues with it.

I'm also content with your final score. After all, you scored it better than the readers (upvotes/downvotes)

7958050

votes are mostly bots or people who like to downvote for no reason.... voting doesn't matter anymore... from the very first thing to gaming bots... account bots do exist. the only way to know if it's a good story is to read it. Not only that it also depends on how popular or what users are into these days...

7958055 There is another way to gauge whether a story is good or not, and that is to read your reviews.

7958071

I kind of did that one time this year since the forums...