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Flora Blossom
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TNot a prank
What if the joke cookies weren't a prank and actually killed and turn the Ponyville citizens into cookie zombies.
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Review: Not A Prank

Summary: The Walking Dead

Review: It’s good fiction so far I like it however it’s not complete… Which makes me wonder what the end is like… I think it’s too early to judge but however, the first two chapters are pretty good.  The flow and the idea is pretty great. The grammar is alright standards… But could improve a bit. 

I give this at least a 7/10


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