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Flora Blossom
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Review: Shine Bright Like a Diamond

Tags: Suicide/Self Harm, Profanity, Drama, Sad, Slice of Life

Summary: A vision of ecstasy

Review:  You colored some words in there…  and that grey-yellowish color is better in night mode than in bright mode.  So, onward to victory that this fiction is alright, I say average.

Yes, you did place a music reference at least it’s not as bad…  this fiction had no fiction cover when I read this…  So, I’m not going to read this since I already read this in the past… I say it’s at least 6/10. 

There is a time that you tried to do a memorable scene near the end I think… but it didn’t have an impact.  The best thing about this fiction though is Sunset and Diamond Teria getting together.  An interesting idea.

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