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Review: Immortal Rain

Tags: Sex, Fetish, Violence, Porn, Crossover

Summary: A crossover porn with Spirit.  Oh my.

Review: It’s an exciting concept that I give it much for an idea.  Chrysalis is a good villain.  King Sombra was the worst villain, and Cozy Glow was the best villain with the best intentions.  

To the fiction it had porn in it… but it wasn’t that sexy for say…  >.> besides the chrysalis chapter which is pretty good. I can only say at least a 6/10 for me.

7829060 Thank you for this review. It was compact but very spot-on. You use few words but relay a lot of valuable information with them.

Though, I would ask, if I may, why was King Sombra the worst villain? After all, all other villains were under his command. That should count for something, right?

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King Sombra had a generic story... control... yes but i'm not sure why he wanted to control or how he even got to want power for his own. He wanted to rule Equestria but for what reason?

Cozy wanted to despise magic... Chrisalis wanted to be loved but could never reach it. Tirek wanted to impress his own father... but Sombra just wasn't good enough to make a powerful villain just to rule and conquer.

7829070 I see your point.

I guess it's up to fanfictions to fill out the blanks.
The story you know
goes much deeper so

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Eh, I have a better one on my mind, more updated you might say
But Sombra can be interpreted as anything but the generic villain, yes. If you are willing to embrace his darker side too, that is, and all the implications that run with it

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also i think the shadow pony had more character than sombra did. he wanted to opened the vault in hallow shades... that must be were Princess Ophaline since g5 is connected. but who knows...

7955314 Is this the vault you speak of?

In the episode apple family reuinion, Apple Bloom lists all the places the Apple family has relitives in. And in this quik list she says the words Hollow Shades. So maybe Hollow Shades was once a normal village and then Starlight came in and took over, so that means she had an apple mark in her vault. And if you look closley at the vault, you can actually see a one red apple mark.